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Autumn's Entrance

Autumn's soundless entrance, causes distress
This changing hue shares a sense of lament
As color in death seems to luminesce
Whispering leaves of Summer turn silent
How peaceful the world when they start to fall
And move to ground in a windswept tumble
To be worn by Earth as a covering shawl
Turning brittle, they begin to crumble
How silent the leaves as they disappear
Turned to mulch by Autumn's chilly hand
Dissolved by time before Winter comes near
The whispering leaves are buried in land

  Talking Summer leaves, turn quiet and brown
  When Autumn brings death, without any sound

9/16/16
contest Leaves Talking

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Date: 9/21/2016 6:16:00 PM
Strange how death and silence can also be beautiful at times... I thought this poem was exquisite and so beautiful. Very nicely done, Frederic! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:51:00 AM
ohh, love the haunting feel of your lines, frederick---smooth, emotive, lovely!..huggs
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Date: 9/17/2016 6:56:00 PM
oh yes, this is how to do it, Frederic. I used a dark theme like this in mine as well. (not posted yet though). I really like yours. I have no idea how the judge is going to choose among all the many splendid pieces I am reading.
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Date: 9/16/2016 1:42:00 PM
Frederic, I rarely pass by a sonnet. I am happy to say i enjoyed yours immensely. It seems as if autumn has inspired everyone and she isn't even here yet! Really nice, my friend:)
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Date: 9/16/2016 12:54:00 PM
- Beautiful and a wonderful image of autumn, Frederic - Best wishes and a delightful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2016 11:24:00 AM
Beautiful seasonal descriptive sonnet Frederick good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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