Autumn's Chill

Deceiving sunshine. Autumn's chill is in the air, Summer's gone too fast.

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David Smalling

Date: 9/8/2010 1:06:00 PM

And our life goes with it, a river without recall. Well done, my friend

Shirley Bracken

Date: 9/6/2010 2:26:00 PM

I really enjoyed your haiku. I am still having temps in the 90's but pretty soon, I know I will be saying this. Great poem Francine, thank you also for reading my work, Shirley

Brian Strand

Date: 9/6/2010 12:58:00 AM

Indeed indeed Francine like the wistful last line.Rgds Brian

James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2010 11:23:00 AM

It does seem that we have gone from Spring into Autumn Francine. The bright nights are getting shorter and the evening chill is descending. Nice Haiku >> James

De R

Date: 9/5/2010 9:25:00 AM

I agree with you...'Summer's gone too fast', Francine. But autumn has its beauty, too, so don't feel bad:) Emily