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Autumn's Ceremony

<<<<< A bevy of  invisible houris and imaginary fairies,>>>> cavorted about as elfin brides under a saffron maple tree^^^^ Dressed in prism-hued layers of chiffon in ethereal shimmers and delicate silken gossamers They having their group wedding in the fall And fairy folk bustled about all round as flimsy and flighty as they could be while henna leaves fell upon the brides, >>>>> in ceremonial nuptial An autumn's breezy ritual<<<<< and as nature's pretty confetti! >>>>Branches denuded Yet autumn's august<<<< for the wilting's ravishing! The willowy fairies, with nylon veils almost drowned and veiled>>>> in honey fallen maple leaves as well >>>>Playing hide'n' seek with browny brownie grooms also camouflaged in the heap...>>> ( beautiful quote 7)

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Date: 1/7/2023 7:52:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. A creative write. Love your ending. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 1/7/2023 10:03:00 AM
My warmest thanx for letting me know, dear paula. Wishing u a very happy merry new year!
Date: 1/6/2023 12:57:00 PM
I have read your contest entry and found it to be delightful. Thank you for participating. Sara
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 1/7/2023 10:03:00 AM
Warmest thanx,
Date: 12/5/2016 12:54:00 AM
Fabulous poem with beautiful descriptions of Autumn. Going in my fav list. My best regards Zaynab.
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Date: 9/5/2016 9:13:00 AM
"The willowy fairy almost drowned in gorgeous fallen maple leaves" -- lovely homage to Autumn. The closing is captivating! –-))
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Date: 11/19/2015 11:34:00 AM
this is a very cool write. love the description of the fairies and the natural feel of your poem
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Date: 8/26/2015 9:26:00 PM
I really enjoyed this whimsical story with a lovely autumn setting... Just wonderful!
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:44:00 AM
What a fabulous write, you penned this a great and with vivid imagery...........A.M.
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Date: 8/23/2015 5:45:00 PM
What lovely imagery! Like to write also on my favourite subject faeries as they do live in Mother Nature's realm. Autumn is a favourite season for me---August such a majestic time. Again I really enjoyed visiting,take care....didee
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Date: 8/23/2015 2:47:00 AM
This is rather good, S! I really did enjoy the imagery - Excellent! My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:42:00 PM
I love your write and how you penned it. It flows smoothly in the heart. So much intriguing.........A.M.
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:35:00 PM
And so she dances through the leaves, caressing the branches as she twists and turns, and cajoles them to do the same.....Great imagery and lovely turn of phrase applied throughout this poem. Love the word gossamer so Ignore Tom's hang-ups. :-)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/21/2015 12:21:00 AM
Warmest thanx for the support!

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