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Autumn's Ceremony

There stood an imaginary, invisible houri fairy A bride under a maple tree Dressed in prism-hued layers of chifon in ethereal shimmers and delicate gossamer She having her weeny wedding in the fall And fairy folk bustled about all round her as flimsy and flighty as they could be while red-gold leaves fell down upon her in ceremonial nuptial An autumn's ritual and as nature's pretty confetti! Branches denuded Yet autumn's august for the wilting's ravishing! The willowy fairy almost drowned in gorgeous fallen maple leaves
Playing hide 'n'seek with her brownie groom camouflaged in the heap.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/5/2016 12:54:00 AM
Fabulous poem with beautiful descriptions of Autumn. Going in my fav list. My best regards Zaynab.
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Date: 9/5/2016 9:13:00 AM
"The willowy fairy almost drowned in gorgeous fallen maple leaves" -- lovely homage to Autumn. The closing is captivating! –-))
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Date: 11/19/2015 11:34:00 AM
this is a very cool write. love the description of the fairies and the natural feel of your poem
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Date: 8/26/2015 9:26:00 PM
I really enjoyed this whimsical story with a lovely autumn setting... Just wonderful!
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:44:00 AM
What a fabulous write, you penned this a great and with vivid imagery...........A.M.
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Date: 8/23/2015 5:45:00 PM
What lovely imagery! Like to write also on my favourite subject faeries as they do live in Mother Nature's realm. Autumn is a favourite season for me---August such a majestic time. Again I really enjoyed visiting,take care....didee
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Date: 8/23/2015 2:47:00 AM
This is rather good, S! I really did enjoy the imagery - Excellent! My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:42:00 PM
I love your write and how you penned it. It flows smoothly in the heart. So much intriguing.........A.M.
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:35:00 PM
And so she dances through the leaves, caressing the branches as she twists and turns, and cajoles them to do the same.....Great imagery and lovely turn of phrase applied throughout this poem. Love the word gossamer so Ignore Tom's hang-ups. :-)
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 8/21/2015 12:21:00 AM
Warmest thanx for the support!