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Autumn's Breath Brings Grief Premiere Contest Winner

Autumn's breath makes the willow weep with grief, for her leaves dangle as brisk winds begin to blow. She cries for their demise, whose lives were too brief. Fall is the season when sunlight casts an amber glow. Ochre leaves fall sorrowfully from trees without a sound, landing aground and in streams where cool waters flow. Crimson and russet, some have withered and browned. For them, Spring and Summer have elapsed far too fast. The evolution of seasonal changes is quite profound. I too, am senescent. Many years of life I've amassed, but do not carve my epitaph upon a granite stone. I still cling to life, and my demise has not been forecast. When my season finally ends, I will not moan or groan. Autumn's chill breath will not sever me from my limb until there's been a harvest of all the seeds I've sown. Even when my eyes fail and my vision grows dim, I'll give thanks that my life's cup was filled to the brim. July 14, 2022 Five Stanza Terza Rima Contest Sponsored by L Milton Hankins

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Date: 8/5/2022 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Absolutely stunning! :)Paulette
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/5/2022 5:34:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Paulette.
Date: 8/3/2022 1:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely trophy win Jenna. Brilliant writing! Blessings xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/3/2022 3:39:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. I'm so glad you liked this one. Take care.
Date: 8/2/2022 11:17:00 AM
Oh, I love this. I LOVE autumn and your beautiful portrait! Amazing. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/2/2022 6:21:00 PM
I’m very pleased with your thoughts. Thanks, Gina.
Date: 8/2/2022 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win Jenna. This is so very poignant - filled with the color of life - a life with gratitude.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/2/2022 6:19:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your comments, Sam.
Date: 8/2/2022 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win. WOW!!! An amazing write/story. I love This One. Have a great/blessed day................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/2/2022 6:19:00 PM
I appreciate your remarks, Paula. Thanks.
Date: 8/2/2022 9:08:00 AM
Congrats on your trophy winning piece, Jenna, I knew when I first read it that it was a winner. John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/2/2022 6:18:00 PM
Thanks for returning with congratulations, John.
Date: 8/2/2022 9:00:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your trophy winning poem in my Terza Rima contest. Excellent use of metaphors with superb rhyme and flow. Exquisite writing from an exceptionally fine poet.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/2/2022 6:17:00 PM
I am very honored that you chose my poem to be on your listed winners. Thank you ever so sincerely, Milt.
Date: 7/20/2022 11:18:00 AM
The words of your verse speak softly to me, Jenna. This is so beautifully penned. John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/29/2022 4:05:00 PM
Many sincere thanks for your supportive remarks. Thank a lot, John.
Date: 7/18/2022 7:36:00 AM
The last two lines do it for me Jenna. You've penned another great one! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/18/2022 9:06:00 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you most sincerely for your kind remarks.
Date: 7/15/2022 5:12:00 AM
Such beautiful sentiments Jenna fashioned is such a beautiful way! The last line of gratitude sums it all up perfectly! happy Friday xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/15/2022 10:14:00 AM
Hello, Mike, and thank you for such wonderfully expressed comments... so appreciated.
Date: 7/14/2022 10:42:00 AM
Love the use of metaphors Jenna and it's not over until the last leaf has fallen. Best of luck in the contest and hope alls well. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/14/2022 4:13:00 PM
Thank you very much, kind sir. ;) All is better. I had an x-ray and it's just inflammation and a sprain
Date: 7/14/2022 9:08:00 AM
Methinks I see a winner here Jenna. If it were not already red the maple outside would be blushing to hear such words. Just a wonderful write
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/14/2022 10:19:00 AM
Thanks so very much for liking my Terza Rima, John. I'm grateful for your time and thoughts.

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