Autumn's Song

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~Autumn's Song~ (Lanterne Suite) Fall Will start It is near Is in the air Now Say Good-bye To summer Hot weather is Gone Air Crispy Starts to cool No more burning Sun Birds Migrate Butterfly Will return next Year Trees Change garb Leaves trasform From golden to Brown Day To thank God for all Thankgiving Day Is Good Food on table Family God's blessings for All Pies Turkey Cranberry sauce Apple cider Sweet Fall Season Of wonder Enjoy rich change Smile Praise Thank God Fall is great Serenity Brings Mild Weather Azure sky Togetherness Nice Fall Brings calm And repose After summer's Storms Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2009 October.29.2015

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Lin Lane

Date: 10/29/2015 5:25:00 AM

Your write tells a good seasonal story, and the form is well presented. I like it...lots, Dorian.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2015 8:56:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Lin,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, comments.You're very kind!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)D