I Am Anaya Poet Tanka

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Autumn Reverie Poetry Contest

Sponsored by JCB Bruel

Second Place

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Autumnal Morning

                                       gold leaf impressions
		                  spiral crisply through cooled wind~                                    
                                           leaving stormy piles

                                       misty crimson dawn striking
                                          embraces foggy notion

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Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2023 at 9:17 AM Congratulations on another win. A wonderful Monoku write/picture. Enjoy your day/win writing away........ I Am Anaya November 8, 2023 at 11:59 AM Thank you, Paula!

Beata Agustin November 1, 2023 at 12:21 AM Wow! Congrats! Thank you for sharing this, making me vicariously experience Autumn in my "Autumnless" country. God bless you. I Am Anaya November 8, 2023 at 11:58 AM Thank you, Beata!

William Kelii Kekaula October 30, 2023 at 8:22 PM I enjoyed the natural trail and subtle touches--love the ending, Anaya! My compliments on your honorable placement in Brian's contest, Bravo and Cheers! Aloha, William I Am Anaya November 8, 2023 at 11:58 AM Thank you, Hilo!

Sotto Poet October 30, 2023 at 10:39 AM You've written a beautiful ode to Autumn, dear friend. The motion in the preceding shot is very appealing to me. Congratulations on your win, Anaya I Am Anaya November 8, 2023 at 11:58 AM Thank you, Soto Poet!

Kim Rodrigues October 30, 2023 at 10:01 AM First two lines are my favorite! Congratulations! I Am Anaya November 8, 2023 at 11:57 AM Thank you, Kimmy!

Bill Baker October 29, 2023 at 11:46 PM You captured the essence of Autumn well, my friend. I like the movement in the accompanying photo, also. The Tanka form was a good match for your poem. A poet friend in Texas, Bill I Am Anaya November 8, 2023 at 11:57 AM Thank you, Bill!

Ink Empress October 28, 2023 at 5:23 AM Impressions of autumn so well captured and delivered here dear Anaya! You have a way with words really! And this tanka is soul warming! i miss autumn ! i relive them through poetry and through poems like this! so creative vivid and beautiful to the readers mind and soul! hope you are doing well! sending you light always I Am Anaya November 8, 2023 at 11:57 AM Thank you, Ink!

David Kavanagh October 25, 2023 at 3:04 PM I am very impressed Anaya, you paint a wonderful spectacle of colours and sounds, bringing autumn vividly to life, great one for contest, fantastic imagery cheers David I Am Anaya October 25, 2023 at 4:01 PM Best comment ever! I soupmailed JCB, I wasn't sure if it's a Monoku or Tanka that she wants. Thanks, David Cheers!