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Autumnal Memories

Oh mighty tree whose leaves look on fire Vibrant orange, red colours spiralling like feathers, raising ones hopes and desire gently with aplomb on the trail falling. Scrunch is the sound children make as they run tossing the leaves and laughing together soon to be Christmas with family fun memories etched in their smile forever too soon the tree is bare no glow to see, no mantle to keep the birds safe and warm winter has cast her white gown on the tree freezing the roots to keep it safe from harm storing the vision of that autumn scene refreshing thoughts when winters frost is keen penned october 9. 2018 I like greens and mauves ring size.....7.

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Date: 10/27/2018 10:14:00 PM
Autumn is a lovely time of the year. You have captured it. Love, joyce
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Date: 10/27/2018 4:28:00 PM
An autumn delight with the vision of happy children playing with the leaves. It takes so little to please a child. Simple pleasures are the ones we remember. I loved your poem Seren...it is a gift! Congratulations on your most deserving win! : )
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Date: 10/11/2018 2:31:00 PM
Seren.. You create a beautiful and memorable scene.. I enjoyed your work!
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Date: 10/10/2018 3:26:00 PM
Such a beautiful seasonal sonnet Seren, I'm still working on mine! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/9/2018 6:56:00 PM
A most pleasant read this evening, Seren. Well done!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/9/2018 8:36:00 PM
hello Daniel thank you so much for stopping to comment....Seren

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