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Autumnal Concerto and Inner Symphony

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10/17/2023 Along a winding lane of glowing orange leaves, I leisurely strolled. Thinking of years past,which, like a sudden, strong wind, blew in cyclonic tunnels away. Walking on crunchy leaves, I pondered my virtues and daunting human failings. In the stillness of that autumn morning dew, hugged by loving trees that were encircling me. Knowing that in God's hands, I was created to follow all His laws, to live with angelic joy. The crunchy concerto of heavenly, colorful leaves beneath my warm, thankful, booted feet. ~I longed for the day, the face of my God to see! ~

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David Fisher

Date: 10/19/2023 4:56:00 PM

Nice seasonal description, Pangie. It seems that a change of season is quite spiritual, once we reflect. It seems too that it was a seen made by god.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/19/2023 6:22:00 PM

Hello David, the concept of a higher power is a big no-no these days . But who does humanity think created all of us, and the beauty and the seasons? Some poets think because they can write a poem that they are gods. I don’t think so. I am watching the sunset on the very ungrateful world..a vacuous, prideful one. Humility goes a long way and creates, a world of art. And awesome-wonder …thanks, Pangie xx.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 10:20:00 AM

A wonderful story/write. I can see it all before me. It is fun to walk on crunchy leaves. Have a blessed day............

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/19/2023 10:45:00 AM

Well, Paula, you made me happy knowing I wrote a good poem and had you experience the joys of autumn. Pangie xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/18/2023 10:49:00 PM

'crunchy concertos' of leaves, indeed. Glowing orange brightens my day, your way. What-a-walk! :) gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/19/2023 10:39:00 AM

Gershon, I was thinking back to my days in Elmwood Park, Illinois mostly. There were tons of leaves, yes crunchy. And lots of raking to do, that doesn’t happen here to that extent. It’s still warm here. Yes! Pangie xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/18/2023 4:13:00 PM

Beautiful in every way dear Pangie. I love the "crunchy concerto" - a delightful image! hugs my friend :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/18/2023 4:28:00 PM

Linda, hello! Nice surprise to hear from you, Glad yu liked crunchy concerto. Watching Rob, sigh! Pangie xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/18/2023 3:29:00 PM

Pangie, the imagery is outstanding in your poem and your title is perfect. I loved 'walking on crunching leaves...pondering. I especially liked crunchy concerto of heavenly....just beautiful. Of course, the last line is exceptional. Have a great evening, Sara

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/18/2023 4:24:00 PM

So nice to see you, I have much going on and lost in the sorrows of Israel. So, it’s my fault I haven’t kept up with you, Glad you enjoyed this poem. Especially the last one.. Pangie xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/18/2023 1:52:00 AM

Incredibly splendid write. We live to grow nearer to our Creator. Blessings

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/18/2023 3:26:00 AM

Yes, Victor! It’s a sad state when we follow the laws ov man, not God. And it can be seen clearly His commandments are disgraced, by many in our world. This maybe the end times. God s watching o er His sheep….thank you. Pangie xx

Karen Jones

Date: 10/17/2023 9:43:00 PM

Panagiota this is beautiful. I love the imagery of the trees hugging you. This is a gem and I am happy you shared it.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/17/2023 10:26:00 PM

Thank you sweet one, I wish you the best here..I mean a place to learn and you to teach us the true secrets of your soul. Poetry has the capacity to heal. Something tells me that you have a quality so soft about you ….like this feathers on a dove! I am honored to have you read this. Here are some hugs for you Pangie.xx xxxx.