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September.28.2023
Autumnal Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Sotto Poet


 

Autumn draws closer day by day From far is heard The screeching of a lone bird Voicing its dismay aloud Over the impending fall Here the moss scrawls Ugly pictures on the bark of trees Where black spiders weave their gossamer Moving, sig sag across the trees’ leprous trunks I see the yellowing leaves Torn down from their sturdy limbs Sliding down noiselessly one by one And landing on the ground With a mournful sound Acorns from the pine trees drop And swell the ground and fall to sleep Life too takes a downward spiral I feel the autumn seeping into me And my heart feels a languid grief The days of my youth Seem to fly away in a flurry Like autumn leaves whirling in the gale Reminding us, that we are not here to stay The withered leaves Which shriek and screech under my feet, Recall to me the cry of martyred youth With all tenacity overthrown. Like them, we will fall and be dead to the world Wrapped in frozen silence, forgotten by all And sucked back into primal void!

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Date: 10/5/2023 10:57:00 AM
- A deep and sensitive autumn poem, Valsa ... congratulations on your win ) - hugs
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Date: 10/5/2023 10:14:00 AM
Dear Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest. This exquisite piece of poetry is a true feast for the senses, overflowing with an abundance of vivid and captivating imagery. Your mastery of language is evident in the flawless composition of this well-crafted poem. Within its verses, you skillfully portray the transitions with such intricate precision, I also like the picture
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Date: 10/5/2023 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Summer is now over. Autumn is coming fast with many pretty leaves. Love to see them but hate to pick them up. I enjoyed this wonderful write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 9/29/2023 10:53:00 AM
"The days of my youth Seem to fly away in a flurry Like autumn leaves whirling in the gale Reminding us, that we are not here to stay" -- Ain't that the truth! Oh how I can relate! Well said. Best of luck in contests.
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:52:00 AM
For me Autumn is the season of death and I see you share my sentiments, although there is so much change around us, in reality everything is dying, even the sun is becoming shy... days are darker and nights are colder.. I could feel the angst in your words.. a wonderful entry for this contest... I was thinking about doing some personification for this one... Always mesmerised by your words.. a talented poetess you are ..
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Date: 9/29/2023 1:02:00 AM
Dear friend, I dread posting my poem on the Fall. Your Autumnal is eloquent and glittering. So much imagery that deserves a high place in the contest. Blessings.
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Date: 9/28/2023 3:42:00 PM
what a powerful poem, Valsa!! Comparing our lives to autumn is brilliant...you've captured fall with some beautiful imagery. I liked 'life, too, takes a downward spiral...and my heart feels a languid grief.' That sentence resonated with me as did the verse itself. Definitely a fav for me. May you have a serene evening, Sara
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Date: 9/28/2023 9:46:00 AM
Nice view of autumnal imagery. The autumn is not the beginning of the end, but a hope for future resurrection.
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