Autumn Ways

tree leaves hued in virtuoso readiness mouthing shade the art of kissing limbo well knowing they fall

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/24/2025 6:59:00 PM

again you mesmerize me with your charming work...i like shadorma; did a contest on this one before!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/24/2025 10:55:00 AM

OH, LOOKY LOOKY AND FEEL WHAT YOU WROTE. Stunning. You did stunning. I did not do Caps intentionally. I adore the feel that 'kissing imagery' gave me. I 'embrace' your poem, Paige. I've missed ya, been MIA for several weeks. I hope all is golden in your world. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/24/2025 2:29:00 AM

Nicely expressed poem, Paige. Short but with wonderful layers of metaphors.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/23/2025 9:02:00 PM

Nice Shadorma poem, Paige. I started seeing more of them lately, must be a contest? If so, good luck! Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/23/2025 8:56:00 PM

the art of kissing limbo…an interesting write, Paige!