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Autumn Tantalizing

Autumn's vibes dazzle blazing crimson dye Luring thrilled visage of romantic sight To passions scarlet whirling amber sigh Waltzing leaves chromatic, as they alight, Rousing sweethearts in autumnal delight When rhythms quixotic lilt sepia breeze As impulses moonlit crooning hearts seize Strumming blushed desires of amorous themes Eying glint canvas beneath gilded trees Lauding nature's gift tantalizing dreams. November 1, 2022 Placed 1st: Dizain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Soto Poet Theme: Autumn Rhymes: ababbccdcd (Rhymezone) Ten syllable per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/29/2023 10:48:00 AM

Dreamy and colorful and beautiful, Vijay.

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/14/2023 9:03:00 PM

I love how your title reads as beautifully as your poem. I have seen some stunning photographs of Autumn, and your words would fit right in :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/30/2022 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations on this win. A lovely write. I love the Autumn time of the year. So pretty. Have a Blessed Happy New Year 2023............

Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2022 4:54:00 PM

Excellent Dizain, Vijay. I love the action and energy in this poem, my friend. It should fare well in the contest! Bill

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/7/2022 5:41:00 PM

Love your vibrant, Autumn Dizain, Vijay: Congratulatiions. SuZ

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/6/2022 8:14:00 PM

Wonderful Dizain, Vijay, love the colours and the dancing and those 'Strumming Blushes' Harry

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/6/2022 9:39:00 AM

Vijay, You always manage to capture the beauty of Autumn as it sails on by in 'tantalizing dreams'. -Richard

Valsa George

Date: 11/6/2022 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win dear Vijay !

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/6/2022 5:07:00 AM

Great work on autumn. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2022 3:39:00 AM

Back to say congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/5/2022 8:39:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/5/2022 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Vijay. You have composed such an excellent poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2022 12:56:00 PM

Very expressive and descriptive work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page . Sara

Valsa George

Date: 11/2/2022 6:25:00 PM

The poem abounds in some of the very catchy usages like 'sepia breeze', 'glint canvas beneath gilded trees'....etc ! Beautiful. Best for a win .

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/3/2022 7:35:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Valsa. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/2/2022 1:47:00 PM

This is gorgeous Vijay. You have shown Autumn in the most beautiful way. Well written, my friend. I really enjoyed this ! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/3/2022 7:34:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/2/2022 7:47:00 AM

Lovely, vivid blend of Autumn magic and romantic magic, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2022 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 11/1/2022 6:33:00 PM

Vijay , I was enraptured in your words and movement and blissful energy. Fall’s silken blanket of passion and spark alive in me . Write on my friend . I love your expression! Best of luck in the contest . Susan :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2022 7:51:00 AM

So nice to hear that from you Susan. Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/1/2022 2:56:00 PM

Rousing sweethearts in autumnal delight

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/2/2022 7:50:00 AM

Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2022 12:42:00 PM

Great imagery, Vijay. Autumn is SO lovely

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/1/2022 2:55:00 PM

Autumn indeed is very lovely--much appreciate your visit and comments, Andrea. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/1/2022 11:41:00 AM

The vivid vibes of Autumn always dazzle me and my creativity. You have created a masterpiece with your words, Vijay. The beauty of the season shines brightly within, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/1/2022 2:54:00 PM

Always a joy when you visit my dear friend. Much appreciate your insightful feedback, Brandy. You are always very kind. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/1/2022 10:39:00 AM

I have always found writing dizain difficult to write though I tried a couple of them. Your poem is perfect. Autumn is always a favorite.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/1/2022 11:00:00 AM

Yes--you have to make sense of all those rhymes needed for this form. Much appreciate, Victor. Many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/1/2022 8:07:00 AM

Exaltation of Autumn and apotheosis of language dearest friend, Vijay. A fave! God bless you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/1/2022 10:59:00 AM

I am honored by your compliments my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks for your comments and your FAVE.

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/1/2022 7:08:00 AM

Beautiful writing my friend. The rich colors of Autumn so much like the richness of human passion -- we are not so different from our seasons. Blessings my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/1/2022 7:26:00 AM

Blessings to you as well, Joe. Much appreciate your presence on my page. Many thanks for your analytical remarks my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/1/2022 6:24:00 AM

You captured autumn well in your verse Vijay, my favourite season, love that waltzing leaves blowing in the breeze, good luck in the contest. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/1/2022 9:00:00 AM

That's my travelling done for this year, but never say never lol.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/1/2022 7:25:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem, Tom. I assume you are back home, at least for a while. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/1/2022 6:12:00 AM

- A wonderful autumn poem, Vijay :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/1/2022 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. You are always very kind. Much appreciate your presence on Soup and my page.