Vijay Pandit Poet Dizain

Autumn Tantalizing

Autumn's vibes dazzle blazing crimson dye
Luring thrilled visage of romantic sight
To passions scarlet whirling amber sigh
Waltzing leaves chromatic, as they alight,
Rousing sweethearts in autumnal delight
When rhythms quixotic lilt sepia breeze
As impulses moonlit crooning hearts seize
Strumming blushed desires of amorous themes
Eying glint canvas beneath gilded trees
Lauding nature's gift tantalizing dreams.

November 1, 2022
Placed 1st: Dizain Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Soto Poet
Theme: Autumn
Rhymes: ababbccdcd (Rhymezone)
Ten syllable per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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Evelyn Judy Buehler May 29, 2023 at 10:48 AM Dreamy and colorful and beautiful, Vijay.

FJ Thomas January 14, 2023 at 9:03 PM I love how your title reads as beautifully as your poem. I have seen some stunning photographs of Autumn, and your words would fit right in :)

Paula Goldsmith December 30, 2022 at 12:52 PM Congratulations on this win. A lovely write. I love the Autumn time of the year. So pretty.  Have a Blessed Happy New Year 2023............

Bill Baker November 9, 2022 at 4:54 PM Excellent Dizain, Vijay. I love the action and energy in this poem, my friend. It should fare well in the contest! Bill

Suzanne Delaney November 7, 2022 at 5:41 PM Love your vibrant, Autumn Dizain, Vijay: Congratulatiions. SuZ

Harry Horsman November 6, 2022 at 8:14 PM Wonderful Dizain, Vijay, love the colours and the dancing and those 'Strumming Blushes' Harry

Quoth Theraven November 6, 2022 at 9:39 AM Vijay, You always manage to capture the beauty of Autumn as it sails on by in 'tantalizing dreams'. -Richard

Valsa George November 6, 2022 at 5:55 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win dear Vijay !

Christuraj Alex November 6, 2022 at 5:07 AM Great work on autumn. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick November 6, 2022 at 3:39 AM Back to say congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Heidi Sands November 5, 2022 at 8:39 AM Congratulations for your win Vijay! :)

Sotto Poet November 5, 2022 at 8:26 AM Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Vijay. You have composed such an excellent poem.

Sara Kendrick November 4, 2022 at 12:56 PM Very expressive and descriptive work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page . Sara

Valsa George November 2, 2022 at 6:25 PM The poem abounds in some of the very catchy usages like 'sepia breeze', 'glint canvas beneath gilded trees'....etc ! Beautiful. Best for a win . Vijay Pandit November 3, 2022 at 7:35 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Valsa. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands November 2, 2022 at 1:47 PM This is gorgeous Vijay. You have shown Autumn in the most beautiful way. Well written, my friend. I really enjoyed this ! :) Vijay Pandit November 3, 2022 at 7:34 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Janice Canerdy November 2, 2022 at 7:47 AM Lovely, vivid blend of Autumn magic and romantic magic, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit November 2, 2022 at 7:52 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Susan Lawrence November 1, 2022 at 6:33 PM Vijay , I was enraptured in your words and movement and blissful energy. Fall’s silken blanket of passion and spark alive in me . Write on my friend . I love your expression! Best of luck in the contest . Susan :) Vijay Pandit November 2, 2022 at 7:51 AM So nice to hear that from you Susan. Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2022 at 2:56 PM Rousing sweethearts in autumnal delight Vijay Pandit November 2, 2022 at 7:50 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2022 at 12:42 PM Great imagery, Vijay. Autumn is SO lovely Vijay Pandit November 1, 2022 at 2:55 PM Autumn indeed is very lovely--much appreciate your visit and comments, Andrea. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole November 1, 2022 at 11:41 AM The vivid vibes of Autumn always dazzle me and my creativity. You have created a masterpiece with your words, Vijay. The beauty of the season shines brightly within, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit November 1, 2022 at 2:54 PM Always a joy when you visit my dear friend. Much appreciate your insightful feedback, Brandy. You are always very kind. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar November 1, 2022 at 10:39 AM I have always found writing dizain difficult to write though I tried a couple of them. Your poem is perfect. Autumn is always a favorite. Vijay Pandit November 1, 2022 at 11:00 AM Yes--you have to make sense of all those rhymes needed for this form. Much appreciate, Victor. Many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 1, 2022 at 8:07 AM Exaltation of Autumn and apotheosis of language dearest friend, Vijay. A fave! God bless you! Vijay Pandit November 1, 2022 at 10:59 AM I am honored by your compliments my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks for your comments and your FAVE.

Joseph P. DiMino November 1, 2022 at 7:08 AM Beautiful writing my friend. The rich colors of Autumn so much like the richness of human passion -- we are not so different from our seasons. Blessings my friend. Vijay Pandit November 1, 2022 at 7:26 AM Blessings to you as well, Joe. Much appreciate your presence on my page. Many thanks for your analytical remarks my friend.

Tom Cunningham November 1, 2022 at 6:24 AM You captured autumn well in your verse Vijay, my favourite season, love that waltzing leaves blowing in the breeze, good luck in the contest. Tom Tom Cunningham November 1, 2022 at 9:00 AM That's my travelling done for this year, but never say never lol. Vijay Pandit November 1, 2022 at 7:25 AM Glad you liked the poem, Tom. I assume you are back home, at least for a while. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2022 at 6:12 AM - A wonderful autumn poem, Vijay :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs Vijay Pandit November 1, 2022 at 7:24 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. You are always very kind. Much appreciate your presence on Soup and my page.