Vijay Pandit | + Follow Poet |
Dizain | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

Autumn Tantalizing

Autumn's vibes dazzle blazing crimson dye
Luring thrilled visage of romantic sight
To passions scarlet whirling amber sigh
Waltzing leaves chromatic, as they alight,
Rousing sweethearts in autumnal delight
When rhythms quixotic lilt sepia breeze
As impulses moonlit crooning hearts seize
Strumming blushed desires of amorous themes
Eying glint canvas beneath gilded trees
Lauding nature's gift tantalizing dreams.

November 1, 2022
Placed 1st: Dizain Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Soto Poet
Theme: Autumn
Rhymes: ababbccdcd (Rhymezone)
Ten syllable per line (howmanysyllables.com)

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2022

Please Login to post a comment

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 5/29/2023 10:48:00 AM Dreamy and colorful and beautiful, Vijay. Login to Reply

FJ Thomas Date: 1/14/2023 9:03:00 PM I love how your title reads as beautifully as your poem. I have seen some stunning photographs of Autumn, and your words would fit right in :) Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/30/2022 12:52:00 PM Congratulations on this win. A lovely write. I love the Autumn time of the year. So pretty.  Have a Blessed Happy New Year 2023............ Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 11/9/2022 4:54:00 PM Excellent Dizain, Vijay. I love the action and energy in this poem, my friend. It should fare well in the contest! Bill Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 11/7/2022 5:41:00 PM Love your vibrant, Autumn Dizain, Vijay: Congratulatiions. SuZ Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 11/6/2022 8:14:00 PM Wonderful Dizain, Vijay, love the colours and the dancing and those 'Strumming Blushes' Harry Login to Reply

Quoth Theraven Date: 11/6/2022 9:39:00 AM Vijay, You always manage to capture the beauty of Autumn as it sails on by in 'tantalizing dreams'. -Richard Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 11/6/2022 5:55:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win dear Vijay ! Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 11/6/2022 5:07:00 AM Great work on autumn. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/6/2022 3:39:00 AM Back to say congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 11/5/2022 8:39:00 AM Congratulations for your win Vijay! :) Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 11/5/2022 8:26:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Vijay. You have composed such an excellent poem. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/4/2022 12:56:00 PM Very expressive and descriptive work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page . Sara Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 11/2/2022 6:25:00 PM The poem abounds in some of the very catchy usages like 'sepia breeze', 'glint canvas beneath gilded trees'....etc ! Beautiful. Best for a win . Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/3/2022 7:35:00 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Valsa. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands Date: 11/2/2022 1:47:00 PM This is gorgeous Vijay. You have shown Autumn in the most beautiful way. Well written, my friend. I really enjoyed this ! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/3/2022 7:34:00 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/2/2022 7:47:00 AM Lovely, vivid blend of Autumn magic and romantic magic, Vijay! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/2/2022 7:52:00 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Susan Lawrence Date: 11/1/2022 6:33:00 PM Vijay , I was enraptured in your words and movement and blissful energy. Fall’s silken blanket of passion and spark alive in me . Write on my friend . I love your expression! Best of luck in the contest . Susan :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/2/2022 7:51:00 AM So nice to hear that from you Susan. Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/1/2022 2:56:00 PM Rousing sweethearts in autumnal delight Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/2/2022 7:50:00 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/1/2022 12:42:00 PM Great imagery, Vijay. Autumn is SO lovely Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/1/2022 2:55:00 PM Autumn indeed is very lovely--much appreciate your visit and comments, Andrea. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 11/1/2022 11:41:00 AM The vivid vibes of Autumn always dazzle me and my creativity. You have created a masterpiece with your words, Vijay. The beauty of the season shines brightly within, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/1/2022 2:54:00 PM Always a joy when you visit my dear friend. Much appreciate your insightful feedback, Brandy. You are always very kind. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/1/2022 10:39:00 AM I have always found writing dizain difficult to write though I tried a couple of them. Your poem is perfect. Autumn is always a favorite. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/1/2022 11:00:00 AM Yes--you have to make sense of all those rhymes needed for this form. Much appreciate, Victor. Many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/1/2022 8:07:00 AM Exaltation of Autumn and apotheosis of language dearest friend, Vijay. A fave! God bless you! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/1/2022 10:59:00 AM I am honored by your compliments my friend. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Demetrios. Many thanks for your comments and your FAVE.

Joe Dimino Date: 11/1/2022 7:08:00 AM Beautiful writing my friend. The rich colors of Autumn so much like the richness of human passion -- we are not so different from our seasons. Blessings my friend. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/1/2022 7:26:00 AM Blessings to you as well, Joe. Much appreciate your presence on my page. Many thanks for your analytical remarks my friend.

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/1/2022 6:24:00 AM You captured autumn well in your verse Vijay, my favourite season, love that waltzing leaves blowing in the breeze, good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 11/1/2022 9:00:00 AM That's my travelling done for this year, but never say never lol. Vijay Pandit Date: 11/1/2022 7:25:00 AM Glad you liked the poem, Tom. I assume you are back home, at least for a while. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/1/2022 6:12:00 AM - A wonderful autumn poem, Vijay :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 11/1/2022 7:24:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. You are always very kind. Much appreciate your presence on Soup and my page.