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Autumn Storm - Collaboration With Chris Green

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Trees outside are raging
anger screams through
branches down to leaves
twigs chastise twigs
     As bark grumbles
     rough emotions
     suppressing the trunk
     seeking the root of the problem
          Burrowed deep between toes
          of saplings
          treasures hide
          or terror manipulates 
     Trembling in the darkness
     earthen enclaves
     soiled decisions pending
     new growth awakenings
               Tentatively tentacles
               reach and entangle
               twine and talk
               awareness grows stronger
Groundbreaking visions;
appear as sunlight
warms this destination
and life again begins

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Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White
December 3  2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/5/2017 8:03:00 PM
Duir, this is excellently done! Love it
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Date: 12/4/2017 10:25:00 PM
A wonderful collab, and amazing poem! :)
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Date: 12/3/2017 9:52:00 PM
Darren and Chris this is a journey of a poem. From the trials to the sunlight-I love the ending. <3
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:27:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend <3
Date: 12/3/2017 6:10:00 PM
Darren and Chris, I love the uplifting spirit of your poem.
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Agnes
Date: 12/3/2017 10:08:00 AM
Excellent. Just excellent! xomo x2 :)
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:26:00 AM
Thanks ma mo :)
Date: 12/3/2017 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you for a very well written poem. I can relate to it as well :)
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Darren White
Date: 12/4/2017 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Heidi

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