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September. 11.2023
Fall Splendor- Rhyming Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

 

With September’s tenure over, October takes charge. Leaves turn yellow, red, and ochre in colourful surge. As autumn breeze strongly veers round and blows, Leaves fall and lie in heaps, rows upon rows. They go into the making of autumn’s mosaic quilt. Before they, under our feet, mournfully wilt, Autumn leaves float and fly like flowers, Twirling and whirling in the air on breezy hours. As the air grows crisp and cold day by day, Autumn is all set to have its powerful sway. Birds by the riverside one by one will fly away, Fearing the golden autumn days will never stay. With so much of beauty and variety in the trees And an endearing whisper in the blowing breeze, Autumn is the one season I wholeheartedly hail, And wish to breathe its air as my last inhale.

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Date: 9/30/2023 12:06:00 PM
Nicely done Valsa. Much vibrant imagery here. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:27:00 PM
Valsa, gorgeous fall imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 9/29/2023 8:57:00 PM
Thanks Tania.... ! Do I deserve any Congratulations for being placed as the last?
Date: 9/13/2023 8:41:00 PM
You've given me the chills, Valsa -- the good kind. The fresh, crisp chills of a vibrant Autumn day. Thank you, gw
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Date: 9/12/2023 4:30:00 PM
Your rhymes are perfect! I appreciate how you've captured fall in all its splendor. You're right. Autumn is a powerful, pivotal season with so much beauty. I loved the last stanza...the endearing whisper of the trees..that was perfect.
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Date: 9/12/2023 10:55:00 AM
Wow! "And wish to breathe its air as my last inhale." Great line! "Autumn leaves float and fly like flowers, Twirling and whirling in the air on breezy hours." Perfectly beautiful from start to finish. You could have a winner here. Best of luck in contest. Blessings.
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Date: 9/12/2023 6:15:00 AM
I see you, like me, are a lover of fall. Your poem is such a delight to read, Valsa. Janice
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Date: 9/12/2023 3:48:00 AM
This is such a beautiful description of autumn in Rhyme, dear Valsa. In spite of being the Fall, how colourful this season is isn't it?... implying there is beauty even in distress in life. You have created such vivid images of the season. I have never been lucky enough to watch the beauty of this season in full glory.... as I don't get to see that here. I can guess, you might have been able to, as Kerala is known for its lush greenery... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/12/2023 3:26:00 AM
Such a lovely autumnal piece Valsa, nice rhyme and flow with good imagery and insightful line of thought too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 9/11/2023 3:17:00 PM
Very few seasonal keep me awake. This one kept my attention. good work.
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Date: 9/11/2023 12:17:00 PM
You are a poet with a vivid imagination and that is portrayed in your poetry and especially in this one...I really love the rhymes and i can see you really enjoyed writing this one...You captured the essence of Autumn very well.. I have to admit it is not my favourite season.. as I feel it brings death.. but im glad you like it so much. My favourite stanza is the second one as the use of words there really stood out for me.. mosaic quilt is lovely...
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Date: 9/11/2023 11:14:00 AM
Valsa, a really beautiful picture of fall landscape. Nice imagery and nice thoughts. My FAVE.
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Date: 9/11/2023 10:13:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, how I want to curl up in your autumn, quilt mosaic and let the wonder of autumnal beauty whisper a lullaby of fresh, crisp air! I so love, and am so moved, by the freshness of your poetic expression - "autumn is set to have its powerful sway." Best wishes for the contest, dear friend! Blessings of autumn splendor to you!
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:05:00 AM
Valsa your descriptive phrases are wafting through this poem like a masterpiece of artwork, painting Autumn in all its splendor. A dream to read. Well done. BOL for the contest, It will do well. A magnificent poem. Favorite.
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Date: 9/11/2023 6:57:00 AM
Valsa, your poem is an absolute treasure trove of beauty. Every word flows effortlessly, creating a symphony of emotions. The imagery you have woven is so exquisitely vivid, that it feels like stepping into a vibrant painting. The rhymes in your poem are like sparkling jewels, adding an extra layer of enchantment. Overall, your work is a stunning masterpiece that captivates the senses and leaves the reader in awe. BOL in the contest.
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