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Autumn Royal

I stroll through autumn, by a pumpkin patch While sun shines on saffron leaves like fire I look at the amber field and thoughts hatch The warmth of hot apple cider desire Apple pie with cinnamon, does transpire In my mind, when cool air touches me As my heart leaps in joy with what I see All shades of ginger found in leaves falling Mixed with bright crimson, shining on the ground I can hear the distant birds are calling Beneath my footsteps, a light crinkling sound I feel what I have lost, I have now found As with the seasons, changing new allure Snow falls upon the umber leaves, so pure Heidi Sands 9/11/17

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Date: 9/15/2017 10:07:00 AM
Beautiful write Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/15/2017 10:10:00 AM
Great to see you Joseph! Thank you :)
Date: 9/13/2017 10:05:00 AM
Great job! Touches all the senses!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2017 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 9/12/2017 1:25:00 PM
An autumn cool mixture of nostalgia and nature, Heidi. This charming poem has a tinge of romanticism in that apple cider. Good soup serving this poem is. Love and hugs.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2017 1:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Freddie :)
Date: 9/12/2017 12:13:00 PM
Really well done Heidi, great use of the given words, really good rhymes as well, this should do well in the contest! I think this is one of your best poems yet!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thank you so much John. I appreciate your positive feedback :)
Date: 9/12/2017 12:04:00 PM
How lovely Heidi, warmest of wishes in the Autumn contest...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Charlie :)
Date: 9/12/2017 10:31:00 AM
Just beautiful, Heidi, I am ready for the apple pie!, good Luck
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2017 12:17:00 PM
Thank you Mike. Me too! lol. Happy Tuesday :)
Date: 9/12/2017 12:04:00 AM
Ohhh, this is really NICE Heidi! I will bet it does really well in the contest! : )
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie :)
Date: 9/11/2017 10:57:00 PM
A very lovely autumn poem my friend. A winner for sure. Thanks for sharing and Best Wishes in the contest. Hugs.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thank you very much Galeo :)
Date: 9/11/2017 7:37:00 PM
You managed the lines so well.. they wrap nicely from one to next.. good depiction of scenery.. lovely poem.. a winner ! Great work, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2017 7:38:00 PM
Thank you Vijay . I appreciate the positive feedback :)
Date: 9/11/2017 6:50:00 PM
This is so beautiful my friend! I really loved reading this illustrious and totally awesome poem this evening! You have written a magnificent piece, one full of autumn surprises and cool breezes! I was enthralled by your skillful endeavor here! Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2017 7:08:00 PM
I moved some words around to edit the last line...now
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2017 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much Russell. I am happy you like this and appreciate your kind comment! :)
Date: 9/11/2017 6:36:00 PM
Makes me feel warm and fuzzy!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2017 6:47:00 PM
That is wonderful to hear! Thank you :)

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