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Autumn Romance

Your beautiful smile blends so nicely with the background of red, yellow, and orange leaves, gently spiraling to the ground. And yes, some leaves create a crown on your fiery hair, making me wonder whether you are a goddess... Softly we engulf in each other's passionate fire, as we softly fall on the ground carpeted with nature's colorful splendor. I taste desire on your lips, as the autumn leaves flood over us, with sweet fragrance and beauty....

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/18/2017 9:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Teddy.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2018 2:32:00 AM

Thank you so much, Line! I really appreciate it! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/29/2017 5:03:00 PM

Congrats Teddy on your first place win!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 6:28:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay! :-)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/25/2017 10:11:00 PM

Congratulations Teddy on your first place win with this creative and amorous poem.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 6:27:00 AM

Greetings, Susan! Thank you so much for your kind applause! *^_^*

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/25/2017 8:48:00 AM

Lovely write Teddy, congratulations...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 6:23:00 AM

I really appreciate your applause, Charles. Thank you! :-)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/24/2017 8:34:00 AM

I love the way your format provides rhythm in this piece, to conjure a lover's mood. Beautiful write, Teddy. Congratulations on your win! ...Fran

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 6:21:00 AM

Hi Francis. Thank you for reading, enjoying and applauding my work! :-)

Brian Davey

Date: 10/24/2017 1:43:00 AM

Interesting format but a beautiful write, congratulations Teddy

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 6:20:00 AM

Thank you so much for your applause, Brian! :-)

Moon Flower

Date: 10/23/2017 10:54:00 PM

Hey job well done, Teddy. Congrats!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 6:18:00 AM

Thanks Moon Flower. I really appreciate it! *^_^*

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/23/2017 9:09:00 PM

A pen a flutter! Lovely piece Teddy, congratulations! xomo :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 6:16:00 AM

Hehe. Thank you so much, Maureen! *^_^*

Janis Thompson

Date: 10/23/2017 6:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 6:14:00 AM

Thank you so much, Janis! *^_^*

Gary Smith

Date: 10/23/2017 4:22:00 PM

Excellent Teddy, congrats :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 6:13:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gary! :-)

Constance La France

Date: 9/29/2017 6:36:00 PM

Teddy, so creative, love it and congratulations on your win !

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2017 5:23:00 AM

Oh, than you so much BW! You're so kind! *^_^*

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/29/2017 4:05:00 PM

A very beautiful scene you paint with your words Teddy! Congratulations on your well deserved high placement! : )

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2017 5:22:00 AM

Hi Connie. Thank you for enjoying and applauding my work! I really appreciate it! *^_^*

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/29/2017 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations Teddy :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2017 5:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi! *^_^*

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/29/2017 5:33:00 AM

Congrats Teddy!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2017 5:19:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay! :-)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/28/2017 11:34:00 PM

What a lovely romp through the fall leaves, Teddy - charming and romantic - I enjoyed very much! Blessings and congrats on this well-deserved win, my friend! :-)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2017 5:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Gregory, for your kind applause. I really appreciate it! Be blessed too! :-)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/28/2017 9:10:00 AM

Very nice Teddy! Beautiful :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2017 5:16:00 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi! *^_^*