Heidi Sands Poet Terzanelle

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Autumn Romance

Colored leaves swirled with emotion
Around us, our hearts beat as one
You held me in perfect notion

Our smiles as bright as the sun
The breeze touched us, in a love’s dance
Around us, our hearts beat as one

Looking in our eyes in a trance
We knew that we found something rare
The breeze touched us, in a love’s dance

We reminisced about all we share
There is nothing that can compare
We know that we found something rare

I held your hand, this day so fair
We laughed about the apple pie
There is nothing that can compare

To this love that reaches the sky
Colored leaves swirled with emotion
We laughed about the apple pie
You held me in perfect notion

Heidi Sands


9/26/17   

*Placed 4th in the Autumn Romance contest.

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Susan Ashley October 2, 2017 at 8:28 PM Congratulations Heidi on your wonderful win with this beautiful poem highlighted so elegantly in a lovely but challenging form. Well done with fantastic romance and imagery! :) Heidi Sands October 2, 2017 at 8:30 PM Thank you very much Susan! :)

Connie Marcum Wong September 30, 2017 at 1:40 AM Congratulations on your win with this difficult form Heidi! : ) Heidi Sands September 30, 2017 at 2:33 AM Thank you Connie :)

Probir Gupta September 29, 2017 at 10:52 PM Congratulations, Heidi for your nice win with this beautiful Terzanelle ... Heidi Sands September 30, 2017 at 2:32 AM Thank you Probir :)

Michael Tor September 29, 2017 at 9:18 PM Enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Congratulations on your win! Heidi Sands September 29, 2017 at 9:22 PM Thank you Michael. :)

Constance La France September 29, 2017 at 6:42 PM Heidi, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write ! Heidi Sands September 29, 2017 at 7:27 PM Thank you :)

Joseph May September 29, 2017 at 3:01 PM Congrats on your win Heidi Heidi Sands September 29, 2017 at 3:06 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit September 29, 2017 at 5:36 AM Congrats Heidi--your Terzanelle places very high in my mind! Heidi Sands September 29, 2017 at 8:17 AM Thank you Vijay! :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 29, 2017 at 12:55 AM Congratulations, Heidi on your win with such a beautiful and rhyming poem as usual. Heidi Sands September 29, 2017 at 8:17 AM Thank you Subimal :)

Gregory Richard Barden September 29, 2017 at 12:35 AM What a lovely Terzanelle, Heidi - exquisitely-penned and charmingly phrased ... I loved the imagery and romantic atmosphere! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-) Heidi Sands September 29, 2017 at 8:17 AM Thank you so much Greg :)

Russell Sivey September 27, 2017 at 5:10 AM Feelings of awe entered my heart when I read this incredibly entrancing poem this morning! This is the height of romance here, "Colored leaves swirled with emotion/.../You held me in perfect notion," such beautiful lines! I loved this piece, Great Work!! Heidi Sands September 27, 2017 at 6:15 AM Thank you Russell for your visits and kind comments this morning. I am happy you enjoyed this one :)

Arturo Michael September 26, 2017 at 6:01 PM I would love to love like that again...truly special...Maybe it's still possible...Undress my heart...let me be free...Have a nice evening Heidi Sands September 26, 2017 at 6:02 PM You can Arturo . Yes, undress your heart and be free. Thank you for your comment! Have a nice evening :)

Joseph May September 26, 2017 at 1:32 PM A wonderful romantic write Heidi...GL in the contest Heidi Sands September 26, 2017 at 2:34 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit September 26, 2017 at 11:41 AM Lovely Terzanelle Heidi! A beautiful melody of romance--a winning poem!! Heidi Sands September 26, 2017 at 11:47 AM Thank you Vijay! Wonderful to see your feedback :)

Mike Gentile September 26, 2017 at 11:14 AM A beautiful Autumn Romance you have depicted, Heidi Good Luck in the contest! Happy Tuesday Heidi Sands September 26, 2017 at 11:18 AM Hi Mike. I think I messed up and left out a big part of the poem when I posted it ..lol I have entered it completely now. Thank you for your kind comment. Happy Tuesday! :)