Autumn Romance

AUTUMN ROMANCE
Summer swan song melts in autumn romance Floating white clouds fondly caress blue sky In morning glow with green grass dew drops dance Amber leaves embrace trees before they fly. On crisp breeze ripples love floats everywhere I adore you gleaming in dream twilight My heart didn’t find yours ever so near Eyes don’t blink lest your grace goes out of sight. Moonlit wind ruffles silk locks on your face With tender touch sea spreads on the beach I uncover your eyes sink without trace In silence stardust emotions I reach. Unsaid words I whisper to autumn air To tell you my love for you is so rare.
September 20, 2017. Form : Sonnet.
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Y. Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 1:10 AM
Hi Subimal, The scene you created with words is beautiful in this romantic verse. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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February 14, 2018 at 1:41 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis for your inspiring comments.
Roper Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal, great write for the contest! Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 11:25 PM
Thank you Eve.
Gupta Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Unsaid words one whispering to autumn air ... Beautifully poetic ... Congratulations on your marvelous win ...
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February 13, 2018 at 11:25 PM
Thank you for liking the poem.
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February 13, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations Subimal on your top win! So many great lines here. I find it hard to pick just one favorite. Lovely, romantic write :) ~ Judy
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February 13, 2018 at 11:24 PM
Thank you, Judith for liking the poem.
Pandit Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:14 AM
A beautiful poem Subimal--congrats on your top placement.
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February 13, 2018 at 11:24 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
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February 13, 2018 at 3:09 AM
- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 13, 2018 at 11:23 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for your appreciation.
Raynes Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:40 PM
i love the dew drops dancing, beautiful poem Subliminal, congratulations on ur first place
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 11:01 PM
Thank you, Lewis.
One Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 4:50 PM
A beautiful poem with wonderful imagery and great romantic lines... Congratulations on your first place in the contest Subimal..
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February 12, 2018 at 11:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One for liking the poem.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 1:34 AM
Congratulations on your fine wIn! : )
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 3:17 AM
Thank you, Connie.
La France Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:41 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win with this lovely poem !
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September 30, 2017 at 12:30 AM
Thank yoiu, BW.
Sands Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations Subimal :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:31 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Canerdy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Subimal. Congrats! Janice
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:30 AM
Thank you, Janice for appreciating.
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:35 AM
Congrats Subimal!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:33 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:15 AM
Congratulations on your nice win ... Beautiful images ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:33 AM
Thank you for appreciating.
Barden Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 12:14 AM
Indeed it is, Subimal - well-said! Just love this gorgeous and romantically whimsical write! Blessings and congrats on this well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 12:27 AM
Thank you, Greg for your comments which value so much.
Sands Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:18 AM
This is so beautiful and caring. Well Done Subimal. I enjoyed this today :)
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September 20, 2017 at 11:03 AM
Thank you ,Heidi for visiting and appreciating.
Gupta Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:34 AM
Enjoyed reading your Autumn Romance ... Nicely penned ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 11:03 AM
Thank you so much.
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