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Autumn Reverie

As autumn begins her slow journey
leaving brilliant colors in her wake,
        I think of you.
It was a crisp day in autumn that I was
first drawn to your smile, do you remember?
        Your long 
dark lashes lowered in a shy tender way. 
My gaze was fixed on you as I breathed in your
        sweet scent.
A wisp of your raven hair fell across your brow.
I wanted to reach out and brush it back for you.
        Suddenly I
felt a rush, a blush bloomed on my face,
and just that fast, I fell in love.
        A week
went by until I saw you again. I could barely
contain my excitement. We made plans to
        have coffee.
After our rendezvous we walked in the park
with autumn displaying her brightest hues,
        our enjoyment
of the colors only surpassed by our first kiss. 
It wasn’t meant to be that we would stay together.
        And now, 
looking back at all those years ago, I remember and
*everything carries me to you.

© Connie Marcum Wong

Note* The last line of my poem is borrowed from Pablo Neruda’s
Poem “If You Forget Me”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ravidas Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 2:12 PM
I don't know why autumn makes people love each other. Whether a premonition of winter or the golden color of feelings. More like the second. It's gold, Connie)
Dalei Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Very amazing write, Connie.It is truly impressive. I enjoyed...............hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:43 AM
Thank you very much Manmath. I appreciate your nice comments. ; )
A   Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 10:04 AM
It felt like a Romantic getaway .... Connie, thank you for sharing her passion and wakeful journey .. Linda
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:47 AM
Thank you. Poetry offers that which is only one of the reasons I cherish it so. I thank you Linda! ; )
Onclaud Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 3:54 AM
a love this radiant charms me, connie.. you delivered such splendid imprints.. i am a neruda fan too!..huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 4:07 AM
Soup mail Thank you Nette.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 3:12 PM
- A pleasure to read, a beautiful poem Connie - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:48 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I will visit you now. Have a great day! ; )
Kapoor Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Just for your information Connie I have placed the Hindi Version of your Poem Famous Last Line with a Blog also. Love and Best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 10:40 PM
Oh thank you very much Ravindra. I wish that all countries would celebrate their differences. Mahalo my friend. I am honored. Love, Connie
Callus Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Ah! to be transported back in time in such a delightful way, Connie! What a lovely memory of young love, wrapped in golden imagery! gl in the contest. #7++ Warm regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 2:52 AM
This is not for a contest, at least none I know of that I could enter this in. Thank you Paul. (It was written for the PFT PC).; )
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:32 PM
SO beautiful. Broken Wings said it best: utterly beautiful in every possible way!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:50 AM
Why thank you Andrea. I appreciate that! ; )
La France Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 5:58 PM
oh, Connie, this is utterly beautiful in every possible way, I am loving it 7 +++
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:53 AM
Thank you for such a beautiful comment Constance! I truly appreciate your words.; )
Lawless Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 3:32 PM
beautiful Connie. those moments that carry us back to those moments.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:55 AM
Yes, the memory can reveal surprising detail, no matter the years. Thank you! ; )
Turner Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Stunning photograph to go along with a very sensuous write, Connie. Love it. Peace my friend:):)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:58 AM
First the poem...then the photo was found. You've got to love Google! Thank you Daniel; )
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:52 AM
wonderful romantic imagery Connie and absolute delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx7
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 4:03 AM
Thank you Jan. I appreciate your encouraging words. ; )
Kapoor Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 6:47 AM
What a beauty you have painted in this sweet little lovely Autumn Poem dear friend. I was thrilled to read these beautiful lines filled with the beauty of nature and love. A full 7+ for this beautiful write. I have a surprise for you as I have completed the Hindi part of your Poem on India. I hope to finally post it either tonight or by tomorrow after a last check and I have also placed my new Poem's Part 1 & 2 & hope you would find it interesting. Love and best wishes always.Ravindra K Kapoor
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:04 AM
Ahhhh, I could not respond before now as my g.daughter was here all day into this evening because her mom worked a double shift. It is impossible to group my words together with a four year old who craves my attention. I just returned from your wonderful blog. How can I thank you for translating my India and last lines poems into Hindi? You have truly honored me with this gift Ravindra. Thank you so much for your efforts and for your kind comments about this poem as well. Contd.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:04 AM
I will have a look at your latest poems with great delight my friend! Blessings, Connie
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