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Autumn Procession

Even and uneven clouds glide, ingress and egress the pale blue. Eager birds landing side by side in holy assembly on pew of branches sing their hymns on cue.

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Date: 10/17/2020 5:40:00 PM
I love the imagery within this piece, Carol. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 10/16/2020 10:22:00 PM
Great imagery. I can picture these clouds gliding by.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/16/2020 10:32:00 PM
Thanks, Jennifer, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I know you are skilled at writing Quintains, too.
Date: 10/13/2020 4:30:00 PM
Your excellent title is perfect for the Autumn imagery of your exceptional poem, Carol. Just beautiful! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/13/2020 7:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan.
Date: 10/11/2020 9:52:00 AM
Wonderful metaphor Carol along with great imagery. Best wishes for the contest.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/13/2020 5:40:00 AM
Thank you, Sam. I really value your comments.

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