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- Autumn Patchwork -

Color me a Maple tree
                                  Autumn storm dressed it naked
                                    Patchwork of gold and copper
                                          Robust crooked roots

  

                                           
                                                01.10.2020
                                        Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                      Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu 
                                  Sponsored by: Constance La France
                                          2nd place in the contest
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Allison Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 3:23 PM
gorgeous autumnal imagery Anne-Lise many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 2:17 AM
- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 1:20 PM
wonderfully descriptive. Congrats on the win.
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:06 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem, love your image too _Constance
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:07 AM
- Many thanks for my place on your winner list, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dutta Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 9:04 PM
Congrats Sunshine to win. I love the words ' Patch work of gold and copper.' Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:06 AM
- Anisha, thanks for the lovely comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 4, 2020 at 6:19 PM
A lovely Dodoitsu Anne-Lise, beautiful words and glorious picture. Congratulations on your win. Belle
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:05 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and congratulations, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 4, 2020 at 5:17 PM
A gorgeous poem and picture, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on a well deserved win. hugs, Evelyn :=)
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October 6, 2020 at 5:05 AM
- Evelyn, thank you very much for the support and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Back with my congrats Ann, we have had none stop rain today, can't wait for drier weather to see the autumn colours. Tom
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 1:17 PM
- Autumn is wet here :( - Thank you very much for the support and congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fowler Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Beautiful write Anne-Lise! Congratulations! Linda
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 1:18 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and congratulations, Linda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Congrats dear lady. And God bless you always :)
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 11:57 AM
- Many thanks for the kind words and congratulations, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Evans Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 11:28 AM
Congrats on your win! What a sweet poem.
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October 4, 2020 at 11:56 AM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and congratulations, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 4, 2020 at 11:04 AM
I'm back, Anne-Lise, to congratulate on your 2nd place win!!
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October 4, 2020 at 11:55 AM
- Thank you very much for the support and congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 6:14 AM
Excellent Anne-Lise! Beautiful to read today :)
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October 4, 2020 at 6:35 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and visit, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 2, 2020 at 11:24 AM
How sad it is to see the colors fade as storms strip leaves from trees! A warm and touching dodoitsu, Sunshine. Wishing you success in the contest! Hugs, carolyn
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:45 AM
- A lot of beauty in the fall, but I think it's sad when all the beauty dies - Many thanks for your lovely comment and wishes, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 2, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Beautiful picture to go with a beautiful write, Anne-Lise. Saved to my faves. I wish you luck in the contest. :) Love, Angie
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:42 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, wishes and special thanks for your fave, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Beautiful verse, Sunshine , Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 7:30 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and visit, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 1, 2020 at 1:14 PM
A great visual representation with a tragic note, Anne-Lise!! A great piece, indeed!!
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 2:57 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and visit, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 1, 2020 at 10:30 AM
So perfect, so Autumn, such crunchy leaves and such a serenity that comes with this month - my fave, thus your poem I must have faved , well penned dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. I have just posted an Autumn poem but for another contest.
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 2:56 AM
- Wish the autumn was so beautiful here too ... but, it is brown and wet, dear Jenny :) - Thank you very much for your comments and wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 1, 2020 at 9:03 AM
You put the beauty of your photo into your poem with its imagery. Beautiful. ~~
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 2:54 AM
- Thank you very much Victor, for your comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 1, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Colorful depiction Anne-Lise. Autumn shines in your words.
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 2:53 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and visit, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 3:52 AM
Love the colours and imagery Anne. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 2:53 AM
- Tom, thank you very much for your comments and wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 1, 2020 at 3:20 AM
I love it and the image, too... beautiful (both)... Happy Fall, my favorite season. I wish you a win, dear friend. Love and prayers and blessings, Gina
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October 2, 2020 at 2:52 AM
- We never experience autumn as in the picture, here the autumn is wet and windy - The leaves become brown and sticky ... the trees are blown bare fast - For me, autumn is a sad goodbye to summer, Regina :) - Thank you very much for your comments and wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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