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Written - 22nd October 2023

Autumn comes with passion intense As fall is ready to commence Leaves transform artistically In vibrance stylistically. Motivated when fall is hence Autumn comes with passion intense The leaves dance their ballet of dearth In pirouettes they swirl to earth. Boughs bare and bold in silhouette Preparing for the winter threat Autumn comes with passion intense Leaves from off trees become past tense. In bright display on ground, leaves lay As they gracefully fade away Carpets of charm in recompense Autumn comes with passion intense.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/23/2023 2:43:00 AM

Enjoying the Lake District? Hope you have good weather. Oh how I wish I could travel and enjoy your views so well written. Blessings.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/24/2023 6:37:00 PM

Did enjoy the visit to the Lake District, there’s so much to see, will definitely go there again. Weather was surprisingly good for the time of year too. Thank you Victor, blessings in return… Belle

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/23/2023 2:03:00 AM

This is a glorious quatern dear Belle celebrating beautiful autumn. Such expressive poetic lines. Loved it! You have visually created vivid, colourful images to the reader that you can easily picture the leaves falling,’ The leaves dance their ballet of dearth’ . I’ve just read it out loud- what impeccable cadence and rhyming! ‘ Autumn comes with passion intense’. I’ve never been to the Lake District but hope to visit one day! This was a real treat and delight to read this morning Belle.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/24/2023 6:33:00 PM

Thank you so much Christina, it was our first trip to the Lake District and it was absolutely beautiful, would definitely go again. I’m delighted that you enjoyed the read… Belle

Lin Lane

Date: 10/22/2023 6:06:00 AM

Dear Belle, your quatern verses are written with the same intensity of color and passion as Autumn displays in its hues. Crimson, gold and other bright shades of Fall come to mind… romance colors. Your thoughts come to life for your readers.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 4:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Lin, just love the changing colours of the leaves on the trees, a truly wonderful season autumn is… Belle

Silent One

Date: 10/22/2023 3:26:00 AM

Lovely imagery with great flow to your words... love the rhymes.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/22/2023 3:11:00 AM

A gorgeous autumnal poem this is, describing the delicate hues of the fall ambience.. Your rhymes are truly impeccable. Autumn is definitely a season of transformation, cleansing and making space for healing.. Your wordplay, alliterations and pristine phraseology make this an eloquent write, beautifully crafted quatern.. :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 4:48:00 PM

Thank you Hiya, autumn is truly a sensational time of year, the trees are exquisitely beautiful, a poet’s delight… Belle

Ink Empress

Date: 10/22/2023 3:00:00 AM

Your imagery and the rhymes in this is truly stunning and so very captivating! I can see through your words, the beauty of fall and leaves pirouetting in various shades. Autumn comes with passion intense is so lyrical, and keeps playing mellifluously in my mind as i read this! Absolutely gorgeous poem. So well woven and delivered .. pleasure always reading you

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/22/2023 4:45:00 PM

Thank you so much Ink, have just returned from a holiday to see the Lake District in the fall and the scenery was inspirational, just beautiful… Belle