Autumn, Maple

Flame, yellow glowing Light this dark shell, eternal Fire warms, color calms. \'/l\/' '\)l(/' '/) \ l / (\' '\( \l/ )/' \\)!!!!!l!!!!!(// \)!!!!!!!l!!!!!!!(/ '\\)!!!!!!!!l!!!!!!!!(//' \)!!!!!l!!!!!(/ '\(!!!l!!!)/' '/)l(\' | | \
The design started out to be one thing and flopped, it can be for the viewers interpretation, what do you think?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/6/2010 2:48:00 PM
I think it';s pretty cool..congrats to you Doris
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Date: 9/3/2010 3:30:00 AM
Many Congratulations on this win Doris. Loved the design.
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this open to interpretation haiku. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2010 1:28:00 PM
Congrats on your great win!!!
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations Doris on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:55:00 AM
I think you drove yourself crazy!!! I have tried these and wow are they hard did you seemy Tombstone? Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:38:00 AM
I love it! Congratulations on your win Doris :) made me smile.. Days been hectic at work.. love Wilma
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win....Audrey
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Date: 8/31/2010 9:38:00 PM
Doris, Congratulations on your HM. To me this looks like a rose bud. I loved both!
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:06:00 PM
congrats on your HM,, nice one
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Date: 8/31/2010 5:47:00 PM
The haiku is beautiful, Doris. And I like the image as well. To me it could be either a leaf or a flame. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:35:00 PM
I have never been able to do that..Im impressed.. The phrases is lovely too. Congrats. BG
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:00:00 PM
WEll done, Doris!! Artistic and lovely! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:32:00 PM
Congrats Doris on your super HM in the Fall contest.. enjoy my friend.. lovely.. luv..
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Date: 10/29/2009 5:07:00 PM
Beautiful, vivd Haiku, Doris. I see the design as a brillian leaf! Great job! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/29/2009 9:57:00 AM
I think it is perfect in both words and image, Doris. Love, Lainie.
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Date: 10/28/2009 10:07:00 AM
A flame colored maple leaf I see. Wonderful Haiku Doris. Wishing you a day filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2009 7:36:00 AM
Turned out great!! A symbol of fall color! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/28/2009 5:27:00 AM
I see the maple leaf. It is a pity that we don't have color. It would really make it pop. Keep writing. Mom
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