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Autumn, Maple

Flame, yellow glowing Light this dark shell, eternal Fire warms, color calms. \'/l\/' '\)l(/' '/) \ l / (\' '\( \l/ )/' \\)!!!!!l!!!!!(// \)!!!!!!!l!!!!!!!(/ '\\)!!!!!!!!l!!!!!!!!(//' \)!!!!!l!!!!!(/ '\(!!!l!!!)/' '/)l(\' | | \
The design started out to be one thing and flopped, it can be for the viewers interpretation, what do you think?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dufresne Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 2:48 PM
I think it';s pretty cool..congrats to you Doris
Mannan Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 3:30 AM
Many Congratulations on this win Doris. Loved the design.
Johnson Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 9:49 PM
Congratulations on your win with this open to interpretation haiku. Love, Joyce
Falotico Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Congrats on your great win!!!
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations Doris on your win in Amelia Harmon's contest "Fall". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:55 AM
I think you drove yourself crazy!!! I have tried these and wow are they hard did you seemy Tombstone? Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Neels Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 4:38 AM
I love it! Congratulations on your win Doris :) made me smile.. Days been hectic at work.. love Wilma
Haick Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 10:11 PM
Congratulations on your win....Audrey
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 9:38 PM
Doris, Congratulations on your HM. To me this looks like a rose bud. I loved both!
Roberts Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:06 PM
congrats on your HM,, nice one
Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 5:47 PM
The haiku is beautiful, Doris. And I like the image as well. To me it could be either a leaf or a flame. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:35 PM
I have never been able to do that..Im impressed.. The phrases is lovely too. Congrats. BG
Richards Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 3:00 PM
WEll done, Doris!! Artistic and lovely! ~ Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Congrats Doris on your super HM in the Fall contest.. enjoy my friend.. lovely.. luv..
Gass Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 5:07 PM
Beautiful, vivd Haiku, Doris. I see the design as a brillian leaf! Great job! Love, Robin
George   Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 9:57 AM
I think it is perfect in both words and image, Doris. Love, Lainie.
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 10:07 AM
A flame colored maple leaf I see. Wonderful Haiku Doris. Wishing you a day filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 7:36 AM
Turned out great!! A symbol of fall color! ~ Love, Carrie
Kendrick Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 5:27 AM
I see the maple leaf. It is a pity that we don't have color. It would really make it pop. Keep writing. Mom
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