Autumn Has Arrived

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

Bushy tailed squirrels gather acorns as the oak trees shed orange tinged leaves trimmed in red and gold. And Jack Frost etches panes of glass in relief sculpting morning mist into abstract winter scenes. Autumn has arrived! (Yalto) 09-17-2020

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/24/2020 12:17:00 PM

Amazing Yalto with wonderful imagery, Emile:-) I really enjoyed this!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/24/2020 1:30:00 PM

Thanks Edward, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/17/2020 10:33:00 AM

Great Autumn poem Emile. I wrote one about a squirrel today too. Enjoy the beautiful sights :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/24/2020 1:29:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your comments my friend, squirrels great to watch, Emile.