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Autumn Haiku- contest

scarlet carnival natures bunting waves in trees summer bids farewell For Contest 'Autumn Haiku', sponsor SKAT A 20th October 2015

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Date: 10/24/2015 1:28:00 AM
A burst of orange zest at the end of fall. Nice.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/24/2015 10:40:00 PM
year. I need a new keyboard x
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/24/2015 2:49:00 AM
Thanks, Rainbow. A lovely time of your, tinged with a little sadness. Viv x
Date: 10/23/2015 8:32:00 AM
Very nice. Gives me almost a nautical feel. Autumn waving good bye to the summer ship as its flags flutter in the breeze. Maybe its the word carnival-Carnival Cruise lines, Where is my mind going. Guess its time for a vacation.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/24/2015 2:51:00 AM
Oh, to be able to sail off on a whim, James. Sadly, where I live, just five miles down the road is a village which is the furthest point from any coastline in Britain. I may have to settle for a paddle in the garden. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/23/2015 12:36:00 AM
Love the haiku :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/23/2015 12:56:00 AM
Glad you like it, Debbie, thanks x
Date: 10/21/2015 9:11:00 PM
this is wonderful!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/23/2015 12:56:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, I'm a huge fan of haiku. And you x
Date: 10/21/2015 3:01:00 PM
Viv, this is excellent (I'll change that to captivating, since Nadya already used that adjective!). I can see this on the winners' list. ~ Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/22/2015 12:31:00 PM
Weather is still lovely and warm; ideal for swimming....though it did rain this afternoon!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/21/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thanks Paul, I think that Autumn's melancholia suits the haiku perfectly. Getting cold now with darker evenings- not a big fan of this time- could do with being over your way for sajf ta' san Martin, methinks. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/21/2015 7:28:00 AM
Excellent Haiku.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/21/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Nayda, I do so enjoy Haiku. Viv x
Date: 10/21/2015 2:13:00 AM
Thanks honeypops, x
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Date: 10/21/2015 1:52:00 AM
stunning Mr Viv :-) hugs Jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/21/2015 7:48:00 AM
why you fed up? SM
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/21/2015 2:33:00 AM
some simply like to have a pop at me Mr Viv am fed up:-( hugs Jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/21/2015 2:14:00 AM
Thanks honeypops, x ( in the right box this time, but you're worth two comments anyway)