Autumn Fog

Remember when it hovered there,
Skimming the brutal ground?
A translucent veil - Never blocking the sun, 
But softening its glow. 
It parted when we passed, 
Mist retreating to our little sides. 
We pretended we were spirits 
Lost in the places spirits go -
Wading through the heavens,
Worlds deep in tangled fantasy.
Until reality eroded our game, 
Melting the clouds away. 
But I was never sad - no, 
Never sad when it cleared,
For it revealed majestic Autumn -
Quietly perfect, much like you.
And every year I wade through fog,
Tears falling with the leaves,
And think of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 11:40 PM
In your usual beautiful style this one is, Heather. Bitter sweet love. I am glad I stuck it out and found a poem to respond to this time. I need to go backwards with all your oldies and make sure of ones I have not seen yet.
Hunter Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 1:37 PM
Beautiful work...I especially love the last 4 lines
Brown Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Congrats on your win in Janette Fisher's sponsored contest Heather. Love, Carol
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November 30, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Heather, congratulations with your awesome win,, always~pd
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November 30, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations once again Heather xx
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November 12, 2012 at 4:00 PM
Wonderful poetry my poet friend. You made my day reading such amazing pieces. I shall be dropping by again. Hugs Michael
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October 30, 2012 at 2:11 PM
A lovely poem for Janette's contest. Seems like we both must have been looking at fog. Thanks for the comments. love phyl
Cobb Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Loved the imagery in this poem.
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October 24, 2012 at 3:11 PM
Very beautiful. Flowed easily. I liked it very much.
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poetry Heather. I enjoyed reading it and wish you all the best in your writing always. Love, Carol
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