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Autumn Falls Like Lovers Do

the morning fog is rising like the fires we lit so long ago in the wake of memories i am more vibrant than the blush of skies and autumn's trees this september morning i watch a flame's dance through amber leaves as they tumble downward the trees stripping layers much like lovers when desire burns i can almost see you rising like shadows beneath the break of sun i can hear the fades of sighs as winded breaths fall out of tempo i taste you in the mist as it falls from my own eyes grounded with the leaves of autumn's call

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Date: 5/16/2020 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Fall is a colorful time of the year. I love the cooler weather. Enjoy your day and win........
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Date: 5/16/2020 8:44:00 AM
Exquisite haunting quality. Your title drew me in and as expected the read was delightful. Lovely.
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Date: 5/16/2020 2:18:00 AM
Refreshingly Enjoyable Congratulated Fecilitated On your first place win
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Date: 9/18/2019 6:52:00 AM
The fall holds much beauty but it signals the end of the joys of summer. You have beautifully mixed the changing of the seasons with the memory of past love. I enjoyed the imagery and feel of this verse. Hugs, John
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/18/2019 11:13:00 AM
Thank you John....i feel the fall is summer's serenade, everything becomes brighter before it dies and becomes bare and dull...colorless.... :) hugs
Date: 9/17/2019 1:29:00 PM
This is absolute beauty through imagery. every stanza divine.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/17/2019 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Jeanne :) hugs
Date: 9/17/2019 10:00:00 AM
I love autumn and have definitely been in love (am now with my hubby) - your words are so romantic and filled with a vibrant joy that I love. Bless you dear
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/17/2019 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina :) not often romance comes off my pen but sometimes it falls...hugs
Date: 9/17/2019 7:32:00 AM
Wow, love sure does seem to be floating softly in the autumn air. What a mesmerizing scene you have penned as the season slowly approaches. Love and desire are definitely felt in this beauty. This deserves a "sigh".
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/17/2019 8:46:00 AM
Autumn stirs my pen with its beauty and drab towards the end so it often takes my muse in both directions ... some romantic writes some sad writes. Hugs
Date: 9/16/2019 5:52:00 PM
Very beautiful phrasing sandy, a wonderful read tonight!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/16/2019 6:53:00 PM
Thank you John, the original was better but as i went to copy it from another program it vanished on me, i have a touch screen desktop, the slightest wag from a dogs tail or speck of dust can close my programs out on me...lesson learned :) hugs
Date: 9/16/2019 2:45:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Sandy..a touch of sad memories..it all makes for a great poem.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/16/2019 6:54:00 PM
Thank you my friend...this one took some time being i lost the original and had to try and pen from memories :) hugs
Date: 9/16/2019 12:46:00 PM
Oh seems once again your sad muse has happy thoughts!;) lol nice wine girl! Beautiful!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/16/2019 6:55:00 PM
thank you...happy with traces of sadness but not total darkness :) hugs

Book: Shattered Sighs