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Autumn Fall

Painted by East wind Cascades of colour in air Tall trees are now bare Looking down on flown offspring Proud of what they have created

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/10/2011 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Eamon. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/7/2011 8:16:00 AM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Eamon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/5/2011 5:19:00 PM

Congrats Eamon on your featured poem this week on PS.. a great piece to share with us all my friend with luv..

Date: 11/6/2010 5:50:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for an uplifting view. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Best wishes in the contest. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/5/2010 9:58:00 AM

Enjoyed reading the many diverse poems here today. I am glad to have came across your amongst these wonderful poems Eamon. Wishing you a magnificent weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/5/2010 7:48:00 AM

Eamon, I just looked at the contest rules and while double and triple tankas are "encouraged," single verse tankas are apparently acceptable. I hope I didn't confuse you. Just want to see you get some recognition for this terrific poem! Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/5/2010 7:03:00 AM

Oh, I love the way you describe the trees looking down on their "flown offspring," Eamon. There is a fall Tanka contest going on now, but I believe it requires three verses. If you expanded on this delightful theme, you could enter it and I think you would do well in the competition! Love, Carolyn

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 11/4/2010 7:08:00 PM

Beautiful Tanka, I enjoyed the read, good luck in the contest. Caryl

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/4/2010 9:09:00 AM

Tanka ,haiku,and senryu are my favorites.I can feel autumn so vivid,beautiful imagery!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/4/2010 8:18:00 AM

Enjoyed reading today.