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Autumn dreams adorned the meadow in a starless blue dome at night. The moon, like covering stream flow, Warmly spreadsheet was silver light. With worn-out tone of joy and love. Autumn dreams adorned the meadow. Dark flocks of birds flap from above. From across the moon's golden glow Dreamy forms with their wings endow. Fresh air has a sense of crispness. Autumn dreams adorned the meadow. Such bright hues spread and float riskless. Weather is changing, it's late year. such vivid hues, they smear and grow. Autumn is staunch and drawing near. Autumn dreams adorned the meadow. Written: August 11, 2022 Hint Of Autumn Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh Checked by HMC.COM/ 8 Syllables per line

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Date: 9/3/2022 10:29:00 PM
Lovely, congratulations on high placement.
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Date: 9/3/2022 7:12:00 PM
Happy to see this lovely poem placed high in Regina's contest ! Congratulations dear Lasaad !
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Date: 9/3/2022 6:22:00 PM
It is so nice to see this gem in Second place my friend. Congratulations on your wonderful win. xxoo
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Date: 9/3/2022 5:54:00 PM
Beautiful poetry. I especially like your third stanza. It fits nicely in the poem and could be its own poem as well. Congratulations:) ps
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Date: 9/3/2022 4:30:00 AM
Stunning! The music accompaniment is brilliant; bringing your picture perfect poem to life. I love this. :)Paulette
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Date: 9/3/2022 3:59:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/17/2022 4:58:00 PM
Nice entry, Lasaad. I'm ready for Autumn already. You wetted my appitite my friend. Good Luck! Bill
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Date: 8/16/2022 4:45:00 AM
I love reading autumn poems and enjoyed yours very much. Autumn is my favorite season. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/12/2022 8:49:00 AM
Love the imagery Lasaad, my favourite season. Hope you're well and hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 8/12/2022 6:17:00 AM
A great Quatern ! All forms of verse are pliable to your pen ! I must try new forms .A beautiful entry for the contest ! Wish you all the best, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 8/12/2022 6:05:00 AM
Much enjoyed the voice of your poem my friend. Splendid images you convey celebrating advent of autumn.
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Date: 8/12/2022 12:51:00 AM
We had a thunderstorm this night. Very unusual. Perfect for your poem for Autumn.
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