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swift scurrying steps
of squirrel's Autumnal dance
    seeking ripe acorns

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/2/2015 1:38:00 PM

Autumns come and autumns go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 11/2/2015 2:15:00 PM

Many thanks for your kind words, Sara.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/31/2015 10:53:00 AM

What a lovely string of awesome Haiku! I enjoyed the imagery - just beautiful, Lin! Warmest regards. Pandita

Lin Lane
Date: 11/2/2015 2:15:00 PM

Gratias, Pandita. Thank for reading it.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/30/2015 4:50:00 AM

What a beauty Lin, amazing haikus ! Congrats on awesome win!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/30/2015 6:02:00 AM

Thank you. Now if only the weather would get a little cooler it might actually feel like Fall here in the South.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2015 4:54:00 PM

you captured many of the beautiful images of autumn. Congrats on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 10/29/2015 5:04:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, and if I haven't returned the congratulations, please accept mine now. I'm having such wonderful fun reading so many beautiful thoughts of others that I sometimes lose my place.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/28/2015 7:02:00 AM

Lin Lane excellent win with this creative beauty full of imagery. Blessings my Dear

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2015 7:32:00 AM

Many thanks for your thoughts, Michael.

Skat A

Date: 10/28/2015 1:16:00 AM

Lin, Congratulations on your awesome Autumn win. **SKAT**

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2015 1:24:00 AM

Thank you, SKAT (my first soup friend) It was a pleasure to be in your contest. I couldn't pass up such a lovely theme and intriguing photos for incentive.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2015 11:43:00 AM

This is a beautiful string of haiku, Lin. I also wrote about the squirrel, but eventually had to omit it when I realized that I could not have more than 3 haiku. gl in the contest. // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2015 12:14:00 PM

Paul, I'm grateful to you for your kind words and insight...

Constance La France

Date: 10/22/2015 6:06:00 PM

Lin, this is so lovely and visual, a majestic 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, For The Birds and for the nice comment, the Pantoum looks difficult but you will see it really is not ~~

Lin Lane
Date: 10/22/2015 6:11:00 PM

Merci, BW. I will look into it over the weekend and maybe share one soon. In the last 2 weeks I've spent more time in PS than I have in completing jewelry orders. lol I guess I could've developed a more destructive addiction, and I've made new friends here.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/22/2015 10:14:00 AM

I love your Autumn imagery here, Lin. Where I live, I see these images first hand. Awesome write, and all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Lin Lane
Date: 10/22/2015 10:44:00 AM

I appreciate your kind words and well wishes, Sandra. I miss the seasonal change to fall since leaving Colorado. It's not so evident in New Orleans, but it's true that "There's no place like home."

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2015 9:20:00 PM

wonderful ones. I especially love the squirrel one!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/21/2015 9:31:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I had a hard time deciding which to put first, but I decided there was no right or wrong order. Maybe I chose the right one after all since it's the one you prefer. Thanks for reading this one.

Autumn Dancer

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