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Autumn Bluster

Windy, restless day Grey clouds dance across the sky The persistent sun peaks through White caps on the pond The day hurries to an end Pink cotton candy sunset

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/16/2009 4:25:00 AM
The word bluster reminds me of my mother. She used it on a regular basis and also blustery in regards to weather. Interesting write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/2/2009 8:12:00 PM
Breath-takingly beautiful! Love lainie
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Date: 9/28/2009 12:59:00 PM
Oh my, beautiful imagery in this lovely Choka Barbara >> James
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Date: 9/27/2009 9:21:00 PM
i love the pink cotton cnady sunset--beautiful---Charma
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Date: 9/26/2009 8:24:00 AM
A nice equinox poem Bg.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 9/25/2009 8:35:00 PM
You paint a wonderful picture...love the last line!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/25/2009 8:24:00 PM
A beautiful day topped with a gorgeous evening BG, nice work...Raul
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