Autumn Bluster

Windy, restless day
Grey clouds dance across the sky
The persistent sun peaks through

White caps on the pond
The day hurries to an end
Pink cotton candy sunset
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 4:25 AM
The word bluster reminds me of my mother. She used it on a regular basis and also blustery in regards to weather. Interesting write. Keep writing. Sara
George   Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 8:12 PM
Breath-takingly beautiful! Love lainie
Fraser Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 12:59 PM
Oh my, beautiful imagery in this lovely Choka Barbara >> James
Chircop Avatar
September 27, 2009 at 9:21 PM
i love the pink cotton cnady sunset--beautiful---Charma
Strand Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 8:24 AM
A nice equinox poem Bg.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Richards Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 8:35 PM
You paint a wonderful picture...love the last line!! ~ Carrie
Moreno Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 8:24 PM
A beautiful day topped with a gorgeous evening BG, nice work...Raul
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