Christuraj Alex Poet Haiku

Autumn Atmosphere

fallen flowers furl
leaf paintings fill the weather ---
perplexed butterflies 


11 September 2022
Autumn in Nature - Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
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Len Gasun October 10, 2022 at 4:51 PM Such a fascinating autumn haiku you've penned here with great alliteration line. I love this a lot my dear friend Christuraj! Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win! God bless. Hugs Christuraj Alex October 19, 2022 at 2:27 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Brian Sambourne September 20, 2022 at 5:25 PM The alliteration in your first line is top notch. In fact the entire haiku captures beautifully, the transition autumn brings. Congratulations! Brian Christuraj Alex October 19, 2022 at 2:27 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2022 at 4:38 PM this is fantastic! congrats for the win Christuraj Alex October 19, 2022 at 2:27 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

MD Johnson September 18, 2022 at 8:24 AM Congratulations on your win. —MDJ Christuraj Alex October 19, 2022 at 2:27 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Heidi Sands September 18, 2022 at 4:46 AM Congratulations for your win. :) Christuraj Alex September 18, 2022 at 5:20 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Tania Kitchin September 18, 2022 at 4:00 AM Chris, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku! Christuraj Alex September 18, 2022 at 5:20 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 17, 2022 at 9:56 PM Congratulations on your win. There's a lot of beauty going on here. This is a fave for me. :) Christuraj Alex September 18, 2022 at 5:20 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Anna Marie Kaianah September 17, 2022 at 9:40 PM Congratulations! "leaf paintings fill the weather" Very lovely Haiku. <3 Christuraj Alex September 18, 2022 at 5:20 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Julie Draper September 17, 2022 at 8:57 PM I really enjoyed this haiku, especially the first line 'fallen flowers furl'. Great imagery Christuraj :) Christuraj Alex September 18, 2022 at 5:19 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Howard Kerr September 15, 2022 at 11:31 PM Immaculate Haiku, Christuraj. Thanks for your comment on my footles. Howard Christuraj Alex September 17, 2022 at 7:10 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Bill Baker September 13, 2022 at 4:06 PM Creative Haiku, Christuraj. I liked it! Bill Christuraj Alex September 13, 2022 at 11:38 PM Thank you very much.

Christuraj Alex September 12, 2022 at 8:50 PM Thank you very much.

Susan Ashley September 12, 2022 at 5:49 PM Dear Christuraj, you capture the aura of Autumn with vivid and beautiful imagery. A grand haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Christuraj Alex September 13, 2022 at 11:38 PM Thank you very much.

Valsa George September 11, 2022 at 9:49 PM Beautiful haiku..... greatly enjoyed ! All the Best dear friend. Christuraj Alex September 11, 2022 at 9:57 PM Thank you very much.

Heidi Sands September 11, 2022 at 11:55 AM Great one. I enjoyed :) Christuraj Alex September 11, 2022 at 8:09 PM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!