Autumn Atmosphere

fallen flowers furl
leaf paintings fill the weather ---
perplexed butterflies 


11 September 2022
Autumn in Nature - Haiku Poetry Contest
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Date: 10/10/2022 4:51:00 PM
Such a fascinating autumn haiku you've penned here with great alliteration line. I love this a lot my dear friend Christuraj! Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win! God bless. Hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/19/2022 2:27:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 9/20/2022 5:25:00 PM
The alliteration in your first line is top notch. In fact the entire haiku captures beautifully, the transition autumn brings. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 10/19/2022 2:27:00 AM
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Date: 9/20/2022 4:38:00 PM
this is fantastic! congrats for the win
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Date: 10/19/2022 2:27:00 AM
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Date: 9/18/2022 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. —MDJ
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/19/2022 2:27:00 AM
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Date: 9/18/2022 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations for your win. :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/18/2022 5:20:00 AM
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Date: 9/18/2022 4:00:00 AM
Chris, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!
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Date: 9/18/2022 5:20:00 AM
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Date: 9/17/2022 9:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. There's a lot of beauty going on here. This is a fave for me. :)
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Date: 9/18/2022 5:20:00 AM
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Date: 9/17/2022 9:40:00 PM
Congratulations! "leaf paintings fill the weather" Very lovely Haiku. <3
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Date: 9/18/2022 5:20:00 AM
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Date: 9/17/2022 8:57:00 PM
I really enjoyed this haiku, especially the first line 'fallen flowers furl'. Great imagery Christuraj :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/18/2022 5:19:00 AM
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Date: 9/15/2022 11:31:00 PM
Immaculate Haiku, Christuraj. Thanks for your comment on my footles. Howard
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Date: 9/17/2022 7:10:00 AM
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Date: 9/13/2022 4:06:00 PM
Creative Haiku, Christuraj. I liked it! Bill
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Date: 9/13/2022 11:38:00 PM
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Date: 9/12/2022 8:50:00 PM
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Date: 9/12/2022 5:49:00 PM
Dear Christuraj, you capture the aura of Autumn with vivid and beautiful imagery. A grand haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/13/2022 11:38:00 PM
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Date: 9/11/2022 9:49:00 PM
Beautiful haiku..... greatly enjoyed ! All the Best dear friend.
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Date: 9/11/2022 9:57:00 PM
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Date: 9/11/2022 11:55:00 AM
Great one. I enjoyed :)
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:09:00 PM
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