Autumn Air

You see your breath
In the Autumn air.
frozen, your sitting in dispair.
Deep, Deep,
Sinking into the dark.
You close your eyes.
Your at peace now.
You open your eyes 
to a changed world around you.


Mckenzie Argall
Autumn Air
10/26/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 14, 2016 at 12:24 AM
nice to see this one again, Mckenzie Argall..LINDA
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November 11, 2012 at 6:17 PM
Mckenzie, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd
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November 6, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I like the contrast in the few lines..Congrats on your win..Sara
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November 6, 2012 at 6:16 AM
Congratulations on your awesome poetry being featured this week Mckenzie. Love, Carol
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November 5, 2012 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Mckenzie. Love, Carol
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November 4, 2012 at 3:49 AM
Congratulations on your win Mckenzie xx
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November 4, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Thanks!
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November 3, 2012 at 9:54 PM
Unique one in the contest! ME LIKES> and congrats on your win.
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November 4, 2012 at 12:28 PM
haha! Thanks!
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November 3, 2012 at 7:46 PM
Congratulaitons Mckenzie. Love, Joyce
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November 4, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Thanks!
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November 1, 2012 at 4:51 PM
nice description of showing the change in seasons.
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