Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Pantoum

Autumn, a Painting of An Artist

Confusing thoughts in Fall, me ceased to stalk
worries into the heart, floated and stepped aside
wonders from afar spreading their smiles in a flock
along with October breeze, pleased to go for a hike.

Worries into the heart, floated and stepped aside
Autumn, enthroned in the soul empire, would set its fire
along with October breeze, pleased to go for a hike
walking paths trodden by shades of foliage, nothing dire.

Autumn, enthroned in the soul empire, would set its fire
a painting of no formal learning, that's Nature the Artist!
walking paths trodden by shades of foliage, nothing dire
a soothing harmony awakening the muse of a harpist.

A painting of no formal learning, that's Nature the Artist!
wonders from afar spreading their smiles in a flock
a soothing harmony awakening the muse of a harpist
confusing thoughts in Fall, me ceased to stalk.



A great pleasure to write this poem after reading Vijay Pandit "Autumnal Flame"..

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Maria Williams November 11, 2019 at 4:08 AM Oh I am sorry that I missed this beauty, but I see now that you posted when we had overseas visitors and I was not on PS much. A belated congratulations my dearest friend on your well deserved POTD, I can see that it deserves the honor. All your poems do. A wondrous write as always....Maria Hugs Besma Riabi Dziri November 15, 2019 at 4:03 AM I'm so obliged to you, dearest Maria for always honouring me with your graceful presence and insightful comments.. once again, please do not apologize for not being able to always being here in the world of poetry.. you have always a beautiful presence in my heart.. thank you so much for your sincere words and genuine concern.. Love and hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos October 24, 2019 at 12:51 AM And I missed your POTD which I so never wanted to happen. You are an amazing soul thank you for your wonderful replies to my last comment - congratulations my dear Besma and soul sister, may you always be blessed and may your talent soar even higher. Hugs and love, Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri October 24, 2019 at 3:43 AM The respect and love we share will always fill the blanks we miss.. respond to wondering left unsatisfied.. wipe out every single speck of doubt that might stain a beautiful kinship.. so much pleased and touched by your sincere appreciation, dear Jenny.. thank you so much for your beauty! Love and hugs.

Robertina B. October 23, 2019 at 6:54 AM Dear Besma, A belated congratulations on your POTD.. Your creativity shines beautifully!! I really enjoyed this masterpiece, my friend.. So exquisite.. Autumn is my favorite season.. As your poem is a definite fav for me.. Many blessings dear Besma! Besma Riabi Dziri October 24, 2019 at 3:34 AM Always a great pleasure to see on my page reading and appreciating with so wonderful and uplifting a feedback! Thank you so much for your humility and beauty, dear Robertina.. my honour and pleasure.. Regards and blessings.

Pashang Salehi October 22, 2019 at 1:27 AM This is a lovely poem Besma... Besma Riabi Dziri October 24, 2019 at 3:32 AM Good to see you again, Pashang! A great pleasure reading your wonderful poetry and praising feedback.. thank you so much.. my deepest regards and blessings.

M. L. Kiser October 20, 2019 at 11:56 AM Well penned inspiration. I love this one, "A painting of no formal learning, that's Nature the Artist!". So true. Besma Riabi Dziri October 24, 2019 at 3:30 AM I'm so pleased my humble poem reached your beautiful soul.. a tremendous delight reading your wonderful feedback.. thank you so much, M.L. Kiser .. Regards and blessings.

Ann Foster October 13, 2019 at 7:20 PM This was lovely. An excellent write my friend. Cheers and flowers... Ann Besma Riabi Dziri October 14, 2019 at 11:16 AM My honour and great delight, Ann! Thank you so much for your sincere appreciation. Regards and blessings.

Silent One October 13, 2019 at 1:38 PM Excellent choice for potd... Congratulations... Besma Riabi Dziri October 14, 2019 at 11:15 AM So much pleased and honoured by your return visit and sincere words, Silent One.. thank you so much. Best regards and blessings.

Smita Kulkarni October 11, 2019 at 5:22 PM Great poem Besma! Mother Nature does wonders for me too! Congratulations on the honor of POTD! Besma Riabi Dziri October 12, 2019 at 12:42 PM A rewarding feedback, Smita! You do honour my humble work by your graceful presence and appreciative words.. thank you so much. Regards and blessings.

Line Gauthier October 11, 2019 at 1:26 PM Congrats on your POTD, Besma. Well done. Besma Riabi Dziri October 12, 2019 at 12:40 PM So kind of dear Line to stop by and honour my humble work.. thank you so much. My best regards.

Jeanne Mcgee October 11, 2019 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your POTD with your wonderful write of fall. Besma Riabi Dziri October 12, 2019 at 12:38 PM Dear Jeanne, thank you so much for your sincere words and congratulations.. Regards and blessings.

Connie Marcum Wong October 10, 2019 at 3:42 PM Wow Besma, this is very lovely! Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! xxoo Besma Riabi Dziri October 12, 2019 at 12:37 PM Dear sweet Connie, so kind of you to spill your beauty on my page and in my heart! So delighted by your praising feedback.. thank you so much. Love and hugs.

Robert Lindley October 10, 2019 at 6:59 AM Congratulations on this gem being chosen as POTD my friend. A much deserved honor and a fav too.. Besma Riabi Dziri October 12, 2019 at 12:28 PM So humbled by your honouring presence and appreciative feedback, Robert.. thank you so much for your sincere words and praise.. Regards and blessings.

Jeanne Mcgee October 8, 2019 at 6:03 PM an amazing and insightful poem. Congrats on your POTD. Besma Riabi Dziri October 10, 2019 at 4:52 PM So humbled by your rewarding feedback, Jeanne.. I am very delighted by your honouring visit and sincere support.. thank you so much.. Regards and blessings.

Brandy Nicole October 8, 2019 at 2:26 PM Dear Besma, a true Artist can Paint the Perfect Picture, using only Words. YOU, my dear sweet friend- have taken the colors of a beautiful season and created a Masterpiece. This is beautiful in every way. I see that you also found your inspiration by a wonderful poet here. Congratulations Besma, on Poem of the Day. Well deserved. :) Brandy Besma Riabi Dziri October 10, 2019 at 4:41 PM Dear Brandy, you are the Artist whose beautiful words colour my heart and uplift my soul.. so sweet and kind of you to paint the beauty of your poetic soul on my page.. Your sincere felicitations I highly value and cherish.. thank you so much my beautiful friend.. my regards and blessings.. Love and hugs.

Arturo Michael October 8, 2019 at 11:19 AM A time for celebrations... Congratulations Besma on POTD Besma Riabi Dziri October 10, 2019 at 4:09 AM Arturo, I would like to thank you from the depth of my heart for your graceful return visit to express your sincere congratulations.. thank you so much. My warmest regards and blessings.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 8, 2019 at 10:03 AM Wonderful October poem Besma! Congratulations on POTD :) xomo Besma Riabi Dziri October 10, 2019 at 4:06 AM Grateful for your sincere words and praise, Maureen.. thank you so much for being here to read and appreciate my humble work.. Best regards and blessings.

Sandra Adams October 8, 2019 at 10:02 AM beautiful penning, congrats on your POTD Besma Riabi Dziri October 10, 2019 at 4:03 AM A great pleasure to receive your congratulations, Sandra.. honoured and delighted.. thank you so much. Regards and blessings.

Sunlite Wanter October 8, 2019 at 9:52 AM Beautiful fall poem, Besma. It's still green here - we are waiting patiently for that Artist to swing by. Congratulations! Besma Riabi Dziri October 10, 2019 at 4:02 AM I hope Nature will bestow upon your land a majestic beauty and paint the most charming colours! So sweet of you, dear Sunlite to stop by and honour my humble work.. thank you so much. Blessings.

Constance La France October 8, 2019 at 9:28 AM Besma, congratulations on POTD with this lovely Pantoum poem. So deserving and so beautifully penned ! Besma Riabi Dziri October 10, 2019 at 1:35 AM I highly value your wonderful feedback and keep it into my heart, dear Heart.. my honour and great delight.. thank you so much.. Best regards and blessings.

Eve Roper October 8, 2019 at 9:26 AM Beautiful, congratulations on POTD Besma Riabi Dziri October 10, 2019 at 1:25 AM Deeply humbled by your graceful visit and sincere felicitations, dear Eve.. thank you so much for your generosity. My warmest regards.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2019 at 8:41 AM - A wonderful p.o.t.d., Besma - Congratulations ... so much deserved :) - Being inspired by others is one of the best things about the soup ... and Vijay is a wonderful poet :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :) Besma Riabi Dziri October 10, 2019 at 1:23 AM Dear Anne-Lise, how kind of you to write so beautiful a feedback! Honoured and pleased.. thank you so much. Regards and blessings. Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2019 at 5:56 AM - So sad, my friend Tommy :)

Line Gauthier October 8, 2019 at 7:03 AM Congrats on your POTD, Besma. Besma Riabi Dziri October 9, 2019 at 5:06 PM Dear Line, thank you so much for being here to read and honour my humble work. Regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit October 8, 2019 at 6:57 AM I am delighted to see your beautiful poem honored with poem of the day..BIG congrats my friend. You deserve all the accolades bestowed in this space..enjoy the day, Besma. God bless! Besma Riabi Dziri October 9, 2019 at 5:05 PM So much obliged to you dear Vijay for your sincere felicitations and praising words on my humble work.. so much humbled by your generosity and humility.. always a great pleasure to read your uplifting feedbacks.. my warmest wishes and regards. God bless you.

Jennifer Proxenos October 8, 2019 at 6:51 AM Besma here we are with another one of your Gems dear friend that so deservedly got POTD - congratulations, please excuse me for not commenting before on this beauty before but packing, packing and moving in two weeks time, not far, but a house in which three generations have lived needs a great deal of sorting out. I think of you often Besm my dear angel, and you are never far from my thoughts. please forgive me - will be back to normal more or less by mid-November. Hugs, kisses, Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri October 9, 2019 at 4:54 PM you are so sweet dear soul sister, and you are always welcome in my heart and on my page.. thank you so much for your sincere words and generous love.. Love and hugs. Besma Riabi Dziri October 9, 2019 at 4:52 PM Just seeing you and reading either your poetry or your feedbacks is a great delight, dear Jenny.. I quite understand your concern .. as you are of great sensitivity and beauty of heart.. but never be concerned.. so many a path we have to walk.. so many a world we have to share.. and we always try to keep up with every single moment in time to please others and ourselves..

Heidi Sands October 8, 2019 at 6:22 AM Congratulations for POTD, Besma :) Besma Riabi Dziri October 9, 2019 at 4:44 PM Heidi, thank you so much for your presence and support! My honour and pleasure.. Best regards.

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