Autumn

A bright sunny day
A sea of blue sky
Patches of white clouds
All in different  shapes
It is cooler now

The trees are changing 
They are shedding leaves
The colors have changed 
To red , yellow, brown

Summer season left
All the leaves have spread
Covering the ground 
It is autumn now
Time to rake the leaves
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Jones Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 5:28 PM
Great description of the season!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Hello Karen, Thank you Karen. although it is windy today, i did some raking. Hugs. /Darlene/
Spilchuk Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 5:06 AM
Nicely written, just like a picture of a beautiful Autumn day.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Hello Denis, Yes exactly as I see it, how are you? I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Rose  Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 3:38 AM
Raking leaves can be so much fun Darlene, I love crunching them under my feet and hearing the crack crackle of the dry leaves, have a great autumn day with love and joy D,
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 9:50 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I began raking leaves today. It feels like summer today so i was hot. We always have 15 bags of leaves in bags. So there are more leaves to fall. the leaves are slow to let go this year. Hugs. /Darlene/
Gifford Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 10:20 PM
A beautiful write, Darlene. Autumn is a wonderful time of year, I enjoyed watching the changes, Oh but those leaves there are everywhere. Stay Blessed, my friend. Hugs for you.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Hello Zyrool, Thank you for the wonderful comment. yes those leaves are everywhere. Hugs my friend. /Darlene/
DiMino Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 6:45 PM
Roll up our sleeves, feel the chill coming as we dutifully rake the leaves. Your poems are always alive, real and in the moment. Brilliant poetry!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 9:58 AM
Hello Joe Dimino, Thank you. today I began to rake leaves. it felt like a summer day. i was hot. No chill here today. Thank you for this lovely comment. Thank you Joe. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene/
Elliott Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 3:46 PM
A sumptuous autumnal poem, Darlene. It's my favorite time of year. Lovely penning. Blessings to you. ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Hello Regina, Thank you for the lovely comment. i was raking today in this summer weather. i got very hot. It makes me wonder what type of weather we will have for winter. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 8:47 PM
Just delightful, Darlene, highlighting all the joys of a beautiful autumn day! Thank you for these lovely moments. Blessings and hugs!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Hello Sam, oh , you are welcome. Autumn is a beautiful season. The leaves lok beautiful in red, yellow, brown. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 8:46 PM
Just delightful, Darlene, highlighting all the joys of a beautiful autumn day! Thank you for these lovely moments. Blessings and hugs!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 11:17 AM
It is a warm autumn season so far. the leaves are slowly falling to the ground when the3 wind blows. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 8:35 PM
Just delightful, Darlene, highlighting all the joys of a beautiful autumn day! Thank you for these lovely moments. Blessings and hugs!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Hello Sam, I remember when I was in grade 5 the teacher wanted us to collect leaves. So we did. They were taped to the window. When the sun shun the leaves were brighter in color. Hugs. /Darlene/
Sands Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Beautifully written Darlene. I hope you have a great autumn day :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Hello Heidi, so far the weather has been warm. It will be a warm weekend. Hugs./Darlene/Thank you for this wonderful comment. Hugs.
Gentile Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 3:55 AM
Darlene, you truly have painted a beautiful Autumn portrait with your words! Happy Friday!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Hello Mike, This is a lovely comment. thank you. Happy Firday to you. xxxxxxooooo. /Darlene/
Empress Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 3:30 AM
Dear darlene, i see through your words as always what youv described, you are a painter of words, you weave imagery in the most seamless manner so vividly! I love the opening lines especially here and i can imagine how clouds in different shapes etc. i love always autumn and you did describe it in such an elegant manner! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 11:02 AM
hello Ink Empress, Thank you Ink Express. These words came to my thoughts as I was creating the poem. Thank you for this wonderful comment. Thank you for sending me the light. Hugs. /Darlene/
Croft Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 5:59 PM
Love your autumn poem!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Hello Karen, Thank you Karen. Have a nice weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Magdalinos Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 1:37 AM
Hello Darlene, you have penned ,a lovely autumnal poem!! Blessings my friend.
Magdalinos Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Hello Darlene, you are welcome . Have a blessed day !
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 11:24 AM
Hello Mulu, Hi! thank you my friend for this lovely comment. Blessing my friend./Darlene/
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 11:59 PM
Beautiful, I was by the river today, such beautiful views of fall!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Hello Arthur, Yes it would be a beautiful view from a river in this Fall season. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 6:24 PM
Hello lovely Darlene :-) Yes! " Summer season left All the leaves have spread Covering the ground " it sounds like a call for going into rest :-) Enjoyed read! Have a wonderful season! ~ AA
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 11:28 AM
Hello Abdullah, Yes it does sound like summer is going in for a rest. Summer is a short season. Winter is longer. I will Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
M  Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 2:52 PM
Your imagery paints a lovely picture and poem sweet Darlene! Debx
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 5:05 PM
Hello Deb M. Thank you Deb. for the wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/x
Read Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Hi Darlene, rake those leaves before the snow starts to fall, Have a lovely evening. Xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 5:07 PM
Hello John Read, Oh, those leaves will be raked before the snow falls. Most of the leaves will fall in November. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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