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Autumn

A bright sunny day A sea of blue sky Patches of white clouds All in different shapes It is cooler now The trees are changing They are shedding leaves The colors have changed To red , yellow, brown Summer season left All the leaves have spread Covering the ground It is autumn now Time to rake the leaves

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Date: 10/29/2024 5:28:00 PM
Great description of the season!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/30/2024 9:42:00 AM
Hello Karen, Thank you Karen. although it is windy today, i did some raking. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/24/2024 5:06:00 AM
Nicely written, just like a picture of a beautiful Autumn day.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/24/2024 9:35:00 AM
Hello Denis, Yes exactly as I see it, how are you? I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 10/22/2024 3:38:00 AM
Raking leaves can be so much fun Darlene, I love crunching them under my feet and hearing the crack crackle of the dry leaves, have a great autumn day with love and joy D,
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/22/2024 9:50:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, I began raking leaves today. It feels like summer today so i was hot. We always have 15 bags of leaves in bags. So there are more leaves to fall. the leaves are slow to let go this year. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/21/2024 10:20:00 PM
A beautiful write, Darlene. Autumn is a wonderful time of year, I enjoyed watching the changes, Oh but those leaves there are everywhere. Stay Blessed, my friend. Hugs for you.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/22/2024 9:52:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, Thank you for the wonderful comment. yes those leaves are everywhere. Hugs my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 10/21/2024 6:45:00 PM
Roll up our sleeves, feel the chill coming as we dutifully rake the leaves. Your poems are always alive, real and in the moment. Brilliant poetry!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/22/2024 9:58:00 AM
Hello Joe Dimino, Thank you. today I began to rake leaves. it felt like a summer day. i was hot. No chill here today. Thank you for this lovely comment. Thank you Joe. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene/
Date: 10/21/2024 3:46:00 PM
A sumptuous autumnal poem, Darlene. It's my favorite time of year. Lovely penning. Blessings to you. ~
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/22/2024 10:00:00 AM
Hello Regina, Thank you for the lovely comment. i was raking today in this summer weather. i got very hot. It makes me wonder what type of weather we will have for winter. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/19/2024 8:47:00 PM
Just delightful, Darlene, highlighting all the joys of a beautiful autumn day! Thank you for these lovely moments. Blessings and hugs!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2024 11:15:00 AM
Hello Sam, oh , you are welcome. Autumn is a beautiful season. The leaves lok beautiful in red, yellow, brown. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/19/2024 8:46:00 PM
Just delightful, Darlene, highlighting all the joys of a beautiful autumn day! Thank you for these lovely moments. Blessings and hugs!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2024 11:17:00 AM
It is a warm autumn season so far. the leaves are slowly falling to the ground when the3 wind blows. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/19/2024 8:35:00 PM
Just delightful, Darlene, highlighting all the joys of a beautiful autumn day! Thank you for these lovely moments. Blessings and hugs!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2024 11:20:00 AM
Hello Sam, I remember when I was in grade 5 the teacher wanted us to collect leaves. So we did. They were taped to the window. When the sun shun the leaves were brighter in color. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/18/2024 5:40:00 AM
Beautifully written Darlene. I hope you have a great autumn day :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2024 10:55:00 AM
Hello Heidi, so far the weather has been warm. It will be a warm weekend. Hugs./Darlene/Thank you for this wonderful comment. Hugs.
Date: 10/18/2024 3:55:00 AM
Darlene, you truly have painted a beautiful Autumn portrait with your words! Happy Friday!!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2024 10:52:00 AM
Hello Mike, This is a lovely comment. thank you. Happy Firday to you. xxxxxxooooo. /Darlene/
Date: 10/18/2024 3:30:00 AM
Dear darlene, i see through your words as always what youv described, you are a painter of words, you weave imagery in the most seamless manner so vividly! I love the opening lines especially here and i can imagine how clouds in different shapes etc. i love always autumn and you did describe it in such an elegant manner! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2024 11:02:00 AM
hello Ink Empress, Thank you Ink Express. These words came to my thoughts as I was creating the poem. Thank you for this wonderful comment. Thank you for sending me the light. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/17/2024 5:59:00 PM
Love your autumn poem!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2024 10:56:00 AM
Hello Karen, Thank you Karen. Have a nice weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/17/2024 1:37:00 AM
Hello Darlene, you have penned ,a lovely autumnal poem!! Blessings my friend.
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 10/18/2024 10:40:00 AM
Hello Darlene, you are welcome . Have a blessed day !
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2024 11:24:00 AM
Hello Mulu, Hi! thank you my friend for this lovely comment. Blessing my friend./Darlene/
Date: 10/16/2024 11:59:00 PM
Beautiful, I was by the river today, such beautiful views of fall!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2024 11:26:00 AM
Hello Arthur, Yes it would be a beautiful view from a river in this Fall season. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 10/16/2024 6:24:00 PM
Hello lovely Darlene :-) Yes! " Summer season left All the leaves have spread Covering the ground " it sounds like a call for going into rest :-) Enjoyed read! Have a wonderful season! ~ AA
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2024 11:28:00 AM
Hello Abdullah, Yes it does sound like summer is going in for a rest. Summer is a short season. Winter is longer. I will Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 10/16/2024 2:52:00 PM
Your imagery paints a lovely picture and poem sweet Darlene! Debx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2024 5:05:00 PM
Hello Deb M. Thank you Deb. for the wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/x
Date: 10/16/2024 10:47:00 AM
Hi Darlene, rake those leaves before the snow starts to fall, Have a lovely evening. Xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2024 5:07:00 PM
Hello John Read, Oh, those leaves will be raked before the snow falls. Most of the leaves will fall in November. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

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