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Sept. 23. 2024
Autumn Haiku- A Set of Three Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin
Placed Third.

 

green has gone dormant days have become much shorter~ autumn's gentle grip maple proudly flaunts multihued autumnal leaves~ a feast to the eye dry leaves fly about they all hasten to their grave~ to become fodder

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Date: 10/17/2024 2:57:00 PM
Ahh!! What a lovely set of Haiku that are on the winners' list. I enjoyed reading them. Fall is definitely upon us now. Congratulations on your winner. Sara K
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Date: 10/9/2024 11:04:00 PM
Back with my congrats, sweet Valsa
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Date: 10/8/2024 1:16:00 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku set.
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Date: 9/30/2024 10:29:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, your words reflect autumn's shining beauty blended with an integral reality of life. Your poems always shine with originality. So well done, dear friend. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you blessings of autumn joy!
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Date: 9/24/2024 1:17:00 PM
ohh, I love the line "autumn's gentle grip" So original, Valsa.
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Date: 9/23/2024 9:05:00 PM
You've captured autumn in a few succinct sentences. It's remarkable.
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Date: 9/23/2024 10:36:00 AM
nice haiku.
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Date: 9/23/2024 6:30:00 AM
"to become fodder" -- Like all of us...I guess there is fairness in their somewhere. Who knows? Well said.
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Date: 9/23/2024 6:29:00 AM
You captured the beauty of autumn well Valsa, Last week I was in sunshine now back to rain and falling leaves. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 9/23/2024 5:32:00 AM
You describe Autumn brilliantly. Especially in the North, we will be regaled by golden leaves. Blessings, dear Valsa.
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