Autumn

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Autumn’s beauty takes place of pride. So now Summer’s heat steps aside. Cool crisp air, freshness overall. More comfortable now its fall. Green turning golden far and wide. Autumn’s beauty takes place of pride. The children will return to school. Easy to study now its cool. A carpet of gold and red leaves. A splendid memory it weaves. Autumn’s beauty takes place of pride. Leaves fall, birds have nowhere to hide. Autumn’s beauty is everywhere. The cooler balmy nights to share. Such beauty in Autumn is spied. Autumn’s beauty takes place of pride.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 1/17/2024 2:00:00 AM

Dear sweet SV, this is such a delight to read and alive with beautiful, vivid colour as autumn itself. Your chosen vibrant picture pairs perfect with it. I absolutely love the refrain line running through the quatern which itself takes pride of place as the glorious season is so wonderfully described. ‘ A carpet of gold and red leaves’ ‘ Such beauty in autumn is spied’. I love this form so enhanced by your artistic rhyming skills and it suits you so well.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/17/2024 2:31:00 AM

Thank you dear Christina.

Christina Bowring
Date: 1/17/2024 2:01:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this autumnal beauty. Hugs to you my dear friend. Xx

Jay Narain

Date: 1/13/2024 10:11:00 AM

Nice portrayal of beautiful autumn.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/17/2024 2:32:00 AM

Thank you so much Jay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2024 2:37:00 AM

- Many beautiful lines that describe the fall ... enjoy the beautiful colors, S.V. - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/13/2024 2:43:00 AM

Thanks darlin. I really appreciate your comment. I accidentally entered this in a contest that it didn't belong in. It had been read and only way I could get it out of the contest was to delete it and repost it.. - Its actually a month old.