Autumn

Lonely shadow of wind swept grain 
Longing for her caress, so sweet 
As the birds mourn with forlorn tweet 

Lonesome wind laced with dark red stain 
Her time had come to fade away 
She wished she had more time to stay 

The morning calls for kiss of rain 
Dew quenched the drought of missing her 
But falling leaves gave the answer 

The blown out souls mourned in deep pain 
The night stole the light of the day 
Though angels came to sing and pray 

For they will not see her again 
Until the time for fellowship 
They wished she will not lose that grip 

Lonely shadow of wind swept grain 
Lonesome wind laced with dark red stain 
The morning calls for kiss of rain 
The blown out souls mourned in deep pain 
For they will not see her again 

September 30, 2022, 4:22 AM 

In Remembrance of Connie - 
Autumn Theme Poetry Contest (1st Place)
Sponsored by: Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:54 AM
"The night stole the light of the day Though angels came to sing and pray" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Roger  Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Thank you very much... Still learning to use figures of speech...
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 1:27 PM
Thanks Roger….. for taking part in this tribute to Connie with your beautiful Autumn Constanza. These lines I felt deeply. “She wished she had more time to stay.” “But falling leaves gave the answer.” Autumn Blessings, Suzanne
Roger  Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 3:51 PM
Thank you very much... And for the placement... I know how it feels to lose a good friend and a colleague... Blessings...
Mcconnell Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 5:43 PM
Such lovely wording Roger, full of nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
Roger  Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 6:44 PM
Thank you very much... It's my first time to make a poem in this format... I'm not much familiar with it yet...
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