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Autumn

Lonely shadow of wind swept grain Longing for her caress, so sweet As the birds mourn with forlorn tweet Lonesome wind laced with dark red stain Her time had come to fade away She wished she had more time to stay The morning calls for kiss of rain Dew quenched the drought of missing her But falling leaves gave the answer The blown out souls mourned in deep pain The night stole the light of the day Though angels came to sing and pray For they will not see her again Until the time for fellowship They wished she will not lose that grip Lonely shadow of wind swept grain Lonesome wind laced with dark red stain The morning calls for kiss of rain The blown out souls mourned in deep pain For they will not see her again September 30, 2022, 4:22 AM In Remembrance of Connie - Autumn Theme Poetry Contest (1st Place) Sponsored by: Suzanne Delaney

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Date: 10/22/2022 5:54:00 AM
"The night stole the light of the day Though angels came to sing and pray" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/22/2022 11:46:00 AM
Thank you very much... Still learning to use figures of speech...
Date: 10/21/2022 1:27:00 PM
Thanks Roger….. for taking part in this tribute to Connie with your beautiful Autumn Constanza. These lines I felt deeply. “She wished she had more time to stay.” “But falling leaves gave the answer.” Autumn Blessings, Suzanne
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/21/2022 3:51:00 PM
Thank you very much... And for the placement... I know how it feels to lose a good friend and a colleague... Blessings...
Date: 9/30/2022 5:43:00 PM
Such lovely wording Roger, full of nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 9/30/2022 6:44:00 PM
Thank you very much... It's my first time to make a poem in this format... I'm not much familiar with it yet...

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