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Autumn

Autumn chills clear windowpane
Hearkens dread of a cold wet rain
Rare hot sun hard to explain.

We observe the first morning frost
The cloud-blossom of cold exhaust
Footprints left on grass we crossed.

Covering up the backyard pool
Layers of clothing become the rule
Time kiddos return to school.

Fresh fireplace log crackles and burns
A pot of soup simmers and churns
Season depression returns.

SECOND PLACE WINNER
Written January 10, 2021
For Attention to Detail Contest
Syllables counted with PS counter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/25/2021 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Autumn is a beautiful time of the year just like your write. Enjoy your win/day with blessings..............
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/25/2021 12:42:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Paula.
Date: 1/25/2021 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with great imagery . Hugs Eve
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/25/2021 12:42:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 1/25/2021 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great poem and I learnt that fireplace is 2 syllables.. :) I have always thought (wrongly) that it was 3. Cheers - Gary
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/25/2021 7:53:00 AM
Thanks, Gary. It's always good to learn something new.
Date: 1/25/2021 5:40:00 AM
Terrific LM! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/25/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, Linda.
Date: 1/24/2021 11:41:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/25/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, Beata.

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