Autumn - Charlieku

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her auburn tresses remind me of falling leaves 10/25/18

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/1/2018 10:35:00 AM

My mother had the most beautiful dark auburn hair before going gray, thanks for this reminder (sadly I did not inherit it!)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/1/2018 12:09:00 PM

Mine hair colour comes out of a bottle lol:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/26/2018 9:21:00 PM

Beauty!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/27/2018 3:31:00 AM

I can write a decent poem from time to time:-) hugs jan xx

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/26/2018 1:54:00 AM

nature intertwined with Nature! A piercing capture in a work of art! A pleasure to read Jan.. Stay in the light of art and beauty. Blessed be always.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2018 4:22:00 AM

Thanks Besma:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/25/2018 4:46:00 PM

this is lovely, jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2018 4:52:00 PM

Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 10/25/2018 2:43:00 PM

Wow Jan, I absolutely love it! I had no idea how many people would actually enjoy this form. Your imagery is great. Thank you so much for writing a charlieku, I hope to see more in the future. Way to go! Hugs // Charlieku xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2018 2:45:00 PM

I really love the CharlieKu I hope it becomes a recognised form:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 10/25/2018 1:48:00 PM

Really nice Jan. I can see the inspiration in the photo.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2018 1:53:00 PM

I wrote the poem then found the pic, I often work that way and rarely start with a picture. This was inspired by seeing someone out walking in the autumnal breeze:-) hugs janxx