Aurora Borealis

Her aqua skirt flows in the sky,
like curtains of the Gods they play;
a Monet brushstroke low to high
- like life itself they go away.
But for now they dodge and weave
as in a phosphorescent pool,
a flirting dance before they leave,
behind a veil of colored tulle.
Behind the veil are sapphire eyes;
behind the skirt, there lies the night.
The curtains are a brief disguise;
seductive show of pure delight.
Now deeper to the heavens drawn,
within the night, before it's gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Watson Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 3:35 AM
This is fantastic poetry,Craig. I have never seen one in real life but you've given me a wonderful 'glimpse' of one this morning! No wonder this caught Mark's eye and imagination! Congratulations.
Toney Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Craig, I have seen the Aurora Borealis several times, and I must say your sonnet nailed it! Congrats to your win on mile 5 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. ~Mark
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December 29, 2018 at 10:28 AM
What a stunning description of nature's handiwork in the sky, Craig. I've always wanted to see the Aurora Borealis. Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Ashley Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 9:20 PM
Your imagery is absolutely amazing, so lively I can see the colors dancing across the sky. A beautiful write Craig! :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 5:48 PM
spellbinding portrait of this beauteous light, craig... a flawless poem sprinkled with lyrical word choices uniquely yours.. thanks for appreciating my piece for you.. hope you are fine!..huggs
Cornish Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Thank you Nette, I tried to comment on your poem but I think I'm blocked, it was/is inspirational.
Parker Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:20 PM
beautifully painted, the image is serene to the mind
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August 2, 2017 at 2:33 PM
This is gorgeous Craig! I was taken back, my mind retracing the glowing skies buried in memory. Just a wonderful write :)
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