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Aurora Borealis

Her aqua skirt flows in the sky, like curtains of the Gods they play; a Monet brushstroke low to high - like life itself they go away. But for now they dodge and weave as in a phosphorescent pool, a flirting dance before they leave, behind a veil of colored tulle. Behind the veil are sapphire eyes; behind the skirt, there lies the night. The curtains are a brief disguise; seductive show of pure delight. Now deeper to the heavens drawn, within the night, before it's gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/30/2018 3:35:00 AM
This is fantastic poetry,Craig. I have never seen one in real life but you've given me a wonderful 'glimpse' of one this morning! No wonder this caught Mark's eye and imagination! Congratulations.
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Date: 12/29/2018 11:41:00 AM
Craig, I have seen the Aurora Borealis several times, and I must say your sonnet nailed it! Congrats to your win on mile 5 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. ~Mark
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Date: 12/29/2018 10:28:00 AM
What a stunning description of nature's handiwork in the sky, Craig. I've always wanted to see the Aurora Borealis. Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/8/2017 9:20:00 PM
Your imagery is absolutely amazing, so lively I can see the colors dancing across the sky. A beautiful write Craig! :)
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Date: 8/3/2017 5:48:00 PM
spellbinding portrait of this beauteous light, craig... a flawless poem sprinkled with lyrical word choices uniquely yours.. thanks for appreciating my piece for you.. hope you are fine!..huggs
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Craig Cornish
Date: 8/4/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Nette, I tried to comment on your poem but I think I'm blocked, it was/is inspirational.
Date: 8/2/2017 9:20:00 PM
beautifully painted, the image is serene to the mind
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Date: 8/2/2017 2:33:00 PM
This is gorgeous Craig! I was taken back, my mind retracing the glowing skies buried in memory. Just a wonderful write :)
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