Get Your Premium Membership

Aunt Sally Is 80

Aunt Sally Is 80 Well, my family calls me Aunt Sally; I never was a missus. I travelled with a disabled colonel, As a nurse, until My sister and I went blind, Had measles when we were just girls; She had a family, you know, But I had to make do myself in the world. So I went to a State blind school, Learned braille and other helpful things; And I travelled with bus and travel bureau, Scaring all my family it seems. I was so stately with a bun at my neck, No one would dare bother me, Finally, I settled in an Eastern Star Home. And here I am feeling free. By the way, I can’t talk very long; I’ve got to help Mrs. Nimel hang curtains; The ladder is made for tall windows, But her arthritis is hurtin’. Then I’ll read children’s stories, To the little visitors come to cheer us up; With braille and the radio and records; My life is too busy – full my cup. My fingertips are my eyes, you see, I can even tell the colors of fabrics, Giving up was never for me; I’ll be useful as long as it takes it. I’ve rubbed the silverware shining, And walked Mrs. Tease down the hall. If it weren’t for my arm-holding leading, I guess she could have a fall. So thank you for coming to my party; And all your love through the years; Learn something from me I ask you, And cry for me no tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/18/2017 7:09:00 PM
Wow, if only more people took on life with this gusto, regardless of the obstacles, such a great write Sunlite,
Login to Reply
Date: 12/8/2017 6:32:00 PM
such a touching poem Sunlite and i loved the line 'my fingers are my eyes, you see' oh how descriptive indeed!:-) your words resonated with me as sadly my mother is losing her sight:-( hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Wanter Avatar
Sunlite Wanter
Date: 12/9/2017 10:47:00 AM
Thank you for reading this, Jan. Her sister (my grandmother) managed very well as long as she was in her own home. But when my grandfather died and she moved in with us, she became disoriented and had senile dementia. I hope your mother can have a consistent environment - I know she has your love!
Date: 11/25/2017 5:21:00 AM
Brilliant sunlight poetry, Sunlite! Breathtaking in imagery detail, so graceful in poetic expressions of love. Such great lines ... my fingertips are my eyes, you see, I can even tell the colors of fabrics. You pen shines on this illuminating write. Gold star poetry, and an instant fave for sure. Supernova glow of such poetic luminosity. Ty for sharing this beautiful legacy w/us. Love and more love always.
Login to Reply
Wanter Avatar
Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/25/2017 11:47:00 AM
Your comment, too, is "breathtaking" to me. Thank you so much for your observations!
Date: 11/23/2017 12:27:00 PM
Such a beautiful written poem, I fell in love with Aunt Sally, you ve clearly written this poem really beautifully and I m glad that I ve read this, thanks for sharing and good luck
Login to Reply
Wanter Avatar
Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/25/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Faraz. I hope you cross an "Aunt Sally" in your life's journey.
Date: 11/22/2017 11:23:00 AM
I love her!!
Login to Reply
Wanter Avatar
Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/25/2017 11:42:00 AM
She was a grand lady, Patricia! Thank you.
Date: 11/22/2017 8:52:00 AM
The personification label confused me because I was trying to figure out what you were personifying. Once I determined it really was your aunt the second read was much more enjoyable.
Login to Reply
Wanter Avatar
Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/22/2017 11:20:00 AM
I had to look it up, Richard, but it is legitimate if she is the personification of courage. Love your poetry, by the way.
Date: 11/21/2017 8:09:00 AM
Touching, touching beautiful tribute to your aunty... What a wonderful lady she was..
Login to Reply
Wanter Avatar
Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/21/2017 6:11:00 PM
Thank you for taking your time to read this one! Yes, she was a wonderful lady.
Date: 11/20/2017 8:09:00 PM
I love poems like this, very touching, and well expressed story.
Login to Reply
Wanter Avatar
Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/21/2017 6:13:00 PM
I know this one was longer than I usually post, so I especially thank you for your time and comment.
Date: 11/20/2017 11:53:00 AM
A loving depiction--a potent poem!
Login to Reply
Wanter Avatar
Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/25/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
Date: 11/20/2017 11:25:00 AM
What a courageous story! Nicely done.
Login to Reply
Wanter Avatar
Sunlite Wanter
Date: 11/21/2017 6:14:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things