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When wavelets curl along the pier To cast a light in shades of teal, I then recall a summer bold Which wrote about our truth, our dare And young we were ...a bliss reviewed The wildest lips moist as night's crest A passion christening one dream While moonglow blessed this warm request. We siezed fresh thirst, moments entwined Where jays in June acted like hosts Yet bad omen of clouds grew stark, More vicious than a thunder's wail. So now I watch shore's reverie The pier much older than love past; A time when seventeen grew still Held by this gentle gentle heart.

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Date: 3/2/2025 4:19:00 PM
So lovely this is. I hope you got a win with this, Nette.
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Date: 2/28/2025 6:51:00 PM
Another wonderful piece gracing and clearing my hazy morning my dearest sis Nette! ( allergy again whew) Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you and GL always. Hugs
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Date: 2/27/2025 12:54:00 PM
One minute you're seventeen, Lips moist, bodies lost to lust. Then it happens, along comes another, redder lips, available. It wasn't to be, and life moves on, and you wonder where it went. In saying that. He might be gay now, or in a crap relationship.
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Date: 2/27/2025 10:43:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Augury" write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 2/27/2025 6:01:00 AM
Reminds me a bit of the song Strawberry Wine. Your writing style is unique Nette and always worth a read
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