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Auburn Haired Beauty Part Ii

We gathered around an old, grey battered table, one leg was to short, darn thing was unstable. Spread out on top laid a map with torn edges, markings in pen, circling valleys and ridges. Azimuth in hand and pen in grips sight, lines were drawn showing us our next fight. Two klicks up north, and a jaunt to the west, we'll cover that ground, with no stopping to rest. Our numbers are weak, but survival is strong, we've been here before, it seems years long. Battle hardened and faithful, this small force of ten, doing these type missions, time and time again. We'll wait until dark, deep into the night, heading out then, beginning our plight. With time on my hands, and empty stomach to fill, then gather some rest, positive that I will. I drift off to sleep, floating a wave of memories stored, she's such a warm site, melting my heart deep to its core. Her arms are crossed, leaning against open doorway, my auburn haired beauty, batting lashes at me. Her eyes are light hazel, gold, green, and soft brown, lighting up my dark soul, thats been vacant, a ghost town. Just as she was bout to speak, with her voice so soft, a vocal treat. I feel my body being gently shaken, My fellow warrior saying, "its time, awaken." Coming to, while wishing I had heard the thoughts she spoke, within my silent, but visual dream, before I woke. The time is dark the mission ahead, seek enemy, we will kill them all, and pray we take no casualties. Almost instantly as I exit the olive drab colored tent, mind sails to my auburn haired beauty, smiling,winking, Heaven sent. I must return back to her whole, just as I had left, not arriving home, within flag draped, silver casket. Auburn haired beauty, she's worth my life and more, her freedom, our home, today, I will kill for.

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Date: 6/28/2019 10:36:00 PM
I think this is even better than the first instalment. This feels more intimate.
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Kenneth Brenner
Date: 7/1/2019 9:16:00 PM
As the lines carry on with "A.H.B."..there will be moments of love and tragedy. :-|
Date: 6/24/2019 7:34:00 PM
Kenneth, again you have captivated me with the heart and soul of your poem. Your powerful imagery of a battle hardened soldier's thoughts and his love longings for his 'auburn haired beauty' are masterfully entwined in your compelling war-time story-telling. The suspense builds as he engages in yet another battle.. in what state will he return home to her..? I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment of this stellar series. Excellent rhymes too. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Kenneth Brenner
Date: 6/25/2019 8:56:00 PM
Susan, yes my dear there will be more of this soldiers endeavors. I plan on 5 parts all will have the same drama with a tad bit of action and tragedy, with (of course), his love within his memories. The warrior and his love reside in Ohio. As far as him returning... That my friend will be a surprise. Thank you always for reading and most of all enjoying. God Bless you always my friend. :-)
Date: 5/20/2019 6:08:00 PM
Exceptional story/and writer. Have you fought for your country in the field/war before? One could imagine that you have. I have read both Parts 1 and 2. Exceptional.
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Kenneth Brenner
Date: 5/20/2019 9:07:00 PM
Lady, your words and thoughts of my words I wrote...im completely with honor..i served in the u.s.Army..but never had the privilege to stare war in its face..im overly in awe with your complete satisfaction of A.H.B..1 & 2..I'm surprised to find, that the writes have impressed you..(in no way of any disrespect)..a female point of view..i actually love the fact..

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