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Attrition

Spring is come but the weather still cold Does not promise we can bloom again We face wild winds in struggles so bold It does not living can be void of pain My children, eyes expectant, scan me For hope, and I am tortured to provide Between myself and the city’s industry The door is thick and the gulf is wide. Spring is come, let birds and frogs believe And sing for barren skies of blue, or sing Forgetting me where crest fallen I grieve For the squander of youth, and lost of wing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2009 7:39:00 AM
David I have just started reading you and boy have I been missing out. You have talent.
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Date: 3/30/2009 1:52:00 PM
Love your writing style and powerful talent. I keep saying wow to myself, whenever I read you. I want to say the very last line hits me hard, but many lines here do. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 8:07:00 AM
Echoes with retrospective sadness David ... yet highlights a real talent.... very well done !
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