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Attraction

‘if it begins with me, then it seems - you have become the middle and the end” --------------------- whisper love, and taste each sweet sigh touch my lips, never asking why feel moments move, in sultry bliss these emotions collide again . . tease me, just hold me like the wind i need to escape in your kiss trace the flavor, playful and slow breathe deep, let passion overflow explore the melody of me . . as i feel your excitement soar my being begs for so much more when sensual lips slide softly _________ ~ aching to explore, to feel love even more ~ Form of Poetry - Spanish Sestet or Sextilla Six-line stanzas of eight-syllable lines rhymed either aabccb or ababcc

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Joseph May

Date: 1/10/2024 3:24:00 AM

"Tasting sighs and tracing flavors" add to the sensuality of your wonderful write Brandy. Enjoyed, hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/10/2024 6:50:00 PM

I'm blushing. Thank you, Joseph. Soft sighs are meant to be savored. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Lewis Raynes

Date: 3/15/2020 6:51:00 AM

I want my lover to kiss like this, this is beautiful

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/15/2020 6:27:00 PM

Oh my, of course you do. ;) Thank you Lewis. This is playful and passionate. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 8/12/2018 2:58:00 AM

Brandy, this is everything a kiss should be.. sweet wet bliss, emotions teased for more of this, tracing playful slow, exploring deep to overflow, lust for more excited sigh, lips sensual dance has made me high!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/12/2018 5:45:00 PM

Oh my!! And you take my breath with your sweet, sensual- poetic comment. This is simply beautiful. Yes, you are right, a kiss is this- plus so much more. Thank you Lyric Man. Gotta catch my breath again. :) Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 8/5/2018 6:46:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Brandy. So romantic an touching. This made me smile :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/5/2018 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Charles. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) I am happy you enjoyed this. And- this poem is about a sweet, sexy kiss- yet it could hold many meanings indeed. ~ Brandy

Mark Toney

Date: 8/4/2018 4:32:00 PM

Brandy, a beautiful, romantic poem... and another poetry form! Spanish Sestet or Sextilla, but I'll stay with Sestet. Sextilla sounds like a Japanese monster film from the 1960s :) I'm going to have to try this form soon. Thanks for your lovely poem and the form!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2018 5:26:00 PM

I agree July Morning!! Go Sextilla go. :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2018 5:25:00 PM

Awe, thank you Mark. It's just a simple photo of me.

Mark Toney
Date: 8/4/2018 5:16:00 PM

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Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2018 5:05:00 PM

May I ask, what change is that??

Mark Toney
Date: 8/4/2018 4:59:00 PM

BTW, I noticed the change :) Good choice.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2018 4:43:00 PM

I am softly giggling. :) Okay, if you wish to think Sextilla sounds like a monster film, then- that is fine with me. However, it sounds sexy to me. Thank you Mark for your kind words. I do enjoy writing with this form. You can write as many stanzas as you wish. I chose two here. I am happy that you enjoyed this playful poem. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/4/2018 9:17:00 AM

The perfect Ache. Thanks for visiting my Deep Inclinations poem.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2018 12:58:00 PM

In so many ways, yes- it is the perfect ache. Thank you Richard. You are welcome for the visit on your poem. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/3/2018 5:17:00 PM

Beautifully breathtaking, Brandy, your soft sensual words fit the form very well. I do enjoy your poetry my friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/3/2018 7:33:00 PM

Thank you John. And you can write about anything, with this form. These emotions though, seem to surface when I use this form. :) I appreciate you reading my poetic whispers. ~ Brandy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2018 3:57:00 PM

a sweet sizzler, ohhh... very nice, brandy... huggs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/3/2018 7:30:00 PM

Thank you nette. I enjoyed writing this. :) Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 8/3/2018 2:42:00 PM

Soft and sensual... beautiful poetry

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/3/2018 7:28:00 PM

Thank you Tim!! :) Brandy