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Attitude Gratitude Concerto and Cheese

life had written an etude in D minor and barely gave him a pass

D for defeat denial disintegration dour reprise of the inevitable

bottom of the class for society sang to its dominant song book

while he was tone deaf and kept quiet hiding a coarse inner voice


his internal melodies sounded like a rusty cheese grinder on arrest

detained him after school hours to punish his apparent shortcomings

but it is difficult to make fine parmesan from blue veined fromage

and the blues of his childhood suffered under cruel constant assault


´the boy has got no sense´ and the child was never spared the rod

when all he wanted was a bit of cane sugar yet he did not suck up

to their blows which knocked out a few teeth in the long process

that laid the cruel basis for his trademark cheeky and sardonic smile



´when you have grown you will show gratitude for our kind efforts

to change your attitude and give thanks to our shaping your mould´

as it came to writing music-sheets he scripted them in lemon juice

secret messages because when life gives acidity you have a choice


one teacher was gentle with him and gifted him sour boiled sweets

for every time he hit a note from his own repertoire of aspirations

he almost chocked on such a gesture of compassion and novelty

breathed out slowly and poured out his heart in cacophonic sorrow


‘I might never become a tambourine major or master of ceremonies 

no choral conductor or symphonic regent in other's marching bands

my choir will be a small ensemble and quality strikes vocal-chords

right where they need caressing and cradling but not false elocution’


‘if I can wipe the cheesy grimaces off the face of my crude tormentors 

so be it then´ but this is in truth not about a vicious viscous fondue 

gratitude has to be earned and thanksgiving follows genuine kindness

attitudes meanwhile may change or strengthen ´for this is my music´


A composition in Roquefort major with walnut crumble and cherries

on my cake and some can see clearly the grinder has its own purpose

when pungent milk turns into custard and some have egg on their faces

‘Its not about perfection but progress is built on effort and appreciation´


26th August 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/26/2020 10:21:00 PM
Kai, oh you're a master! Egg on face custard, rusty chesse grater, soft cheese, other comparisons I may get with further reading. Sounds like maybe Catholic school. I am so impressed with your hints in place of specifics. I have so much to learn from you. Don't read my stuff, I'm not looking for a comment trade. I admire your work, the way your mind works. It's rewarding to read.
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