Atthis: a Sapphic Ode 3

(Hardly anything is known about Sappho, but no-one seriously 
doubts her greatness as a poet. She lived on the Greek island 
of Lesbos (hence “Lesbian”) in the seventh century BC. All that 
has survived of her work is a scattering of scraps, but even this 
meagre evidence establishes her as one of the foremost poets 
of all time.)


V. 
The sunlight is old now, 
and losing its fine force. 
Beneath the turgid moon, then, 
let young women take their places. 
As the silent globe swells up, 
her sisters, the silver stars, 
show their little faces. 

Slow, slow, naked feet 
together pound the earth. 
Our circle is a living altar, 
and grass fronds kiss our calves. 

Just for one night the moon is full, 
glorious in her loveliness, 
dancing her own white path 
on the sparkling dark sea. 

Dance together 
under the moon, 
Aphrodite's daughters! 
Dance with us, 
goddess of love, 
with the subtly shining hair. 

You are mine, fair Atthis, 
and will never be this fair again. 
When drum and tambourine 
have captured us and wiped us clean 
of self, we will make love. 

In each other's arms, 
breathing, sleeping, 
with silent moon gliding ... 
why, then, am I weeping?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 12, 2017 at 10:59 AM
That last stanza, it alone is a little gem. Attica... just that one place that remembers her. It's so wonderful that, even though partially, this beautiful poetry is still alive. Thank you SO much :)
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March 12, 2017 at 11:45 AM
I think I am the one who should be thanking YOU!
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