Brian Strand Poet Narrative

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In the base motor pool
See an off-limits card school-
A scheming Bilko takes the pot
Hoodwinking top brass was his game,
Fast talking his claim to fame.

Brian Strand  Rhyme me an olf TV show-Sergeant Bilko

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Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2012 at 2:39 AM BRIAN,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

Sara Kendrick February 10, 2012 at 5:53 PM Remember that one when I thought about it for awhile..Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown February 10, 2012 at 11:18 AM A belated Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Old TV Show" contest Brian. Love, Carol

David Williams February 9, 2012 at 2:38 AM Brian congrats on your win, Bilko hehehe..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 9, 2012 at 1:54 AM Congratulations Brian xx

Debbie Guzzi February 8, 2012 at 6:00 PM wow now that's an old one I can barely remember his face? Something like Ethels husbands face on Lucy? Congrad's Light & Love

Robert Pettit February 8, 2012 at 4:40 PM Congratulations on your win Brian. The character played by the late Phil Silvers was a classic one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 8, 2012 at 4:35 PM congrats Brian on a wonderful win for this great write on a funny show of yesterday luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2010 at 5:43 AM Congratulations Brian on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry Contest # 2". Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne September 19, 2010 at 6:35 PM congratlations Brian !

James Fraser September 19, 2010 at 6:37 AM Many congratulations Brian on your win in John's contest. I can picture the scene as they play. Very funny series when it was aired >> James

Dr.Ram Mehta September 19, 2010 at 4:58 AM Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2010 at 6:07 PM Congrats Brian on your big win in the Giggles Poetry contest.. a super piece my friend.. enjoy your top notch win with luv...

Francine Roberts September 18, 2010 at 5:43 PM congrats on your win in the contest

Audrey Haick September 18, 2010 at 10:04 AM Congratulations on your win in John's Giggles Contest, Brian! Peace, Audrey

Joyce Johnson September 18, 2010 at 8:51 AM Congratulations Brian on a well written limerick and your win. Love, Joyce

John Freeman September 18, 2010 at 8:04 AM Thank you Brian for supporting my contest, Congratulations on your success. Agape, Moses