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In the base motor pool
See an off-limits card school-
A scheming Bilko takes the pot
Hoodwinking top brass was his game,
Fast talking his claim to fame.

Brian Strand  Rhyme me an olf TV show-Sergeant Bilko

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 2/12/2012 2:39:00 AM
BRIAN,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/10/2012 5:53:00 PM
Remember that one when I thought about it for awhile..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:18:00 AM
A belated Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Old TV Show" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2012 2:38:00 AM
Brian congrats on your win, Bilko hehehe..David
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Date: 2/9/2012 1:54:00 AM
Congratulations Brian xx
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Date: 2/8/2012 6:00:00 PM
wow now that's an old one I can barely remember his face? Something like Ethels husbands face on Lucy? Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/8/2012 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Brian. The character played by the late Phil Silvers was a classic one.
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Date: 2/8/2012 4:35:00 PM
congrats Brian on a wonderful win for this great write on a funny show of yesterday luv..
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Date: 9/21/2010 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry Contest # 2". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:35:00 PM
congratlations Brian !
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:37:00 AM
Many congratulations Brian on your win in John's contest. I can picture the scene as they play. Very funny series when it was aired >> James
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Date: 9/19/2010 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Brian
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:07:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your big win in the Giggles Poetry contest.. a super piece my friend.. enjoy your top notch win with luv...
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Date: 9/18/2010 5:43:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/18/2010 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's Giggles Contest, Brian! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/18/2010 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on a well written limerick and your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/18/2010 8:04:00 AM
Thank you Brian for supporting my contest, Congratulations on your success. Agape, Moses
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