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Atrocity

I stole the silver lining from the clouds above and wove them into a mantle for my bare shoulders no longer will wishes come true this atrocity realized the heavens opened crying sparkling tears these I beaded on a golden thread for my neck when darkness came, I pulled the twinkling stars from the night stitching them into a flowing skirt using the crescent moon as a tiara for my hair for these sins I am damned instead of creating something beautiful, I pillaged it selfish, narcissistic, envious of beauty beyond my own

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2010 9:41:00 AM
well hey i was just reading this poem again from my favorite and then i noticed you left a thankyou back in january well i did not know and no need to thak me i try to give people my honest opinion and i honestly think you have a talent! sorry for the late reply! =)jo
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Date: 1/13/2010 9:35:00 AM
thank you, Joanna, for this comment...I can't tell you what this means to me :) JBt
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Date: 1/13/2010 9:04:00 AM
I cant believ I'm your first comment! this poem is amazing, truely, the way it speaks of human nature, but still keeping it beautifully discriptive. im so jealous of your skills!
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