Atop Tides

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Atop tides tethered to the moon Endless waves wash ashore As nature sings in perfect tune, You feel it in your core. Somehow, you're connected. Yet never suspected You would be affected. Time slip slides, Atop tides.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/4/2021 9:37:00 AM

"Time slip slides Atop tides" Beautiful! Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/4/2021 10:51:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, as always your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/4/2021 9:34:00 AM

Beautiful writing, Emile. I love the ocean, so this poem resonated with me in a very special way. I have often sat by the Bay in Puerto Vallarta under the moon and meditated to the sounds of the tide splashing against the rocks.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/4/2021 10:02:00 AM

Thanks, Milt, as always your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.